Usury by Tudore
Lol, finishing it, I was left with an "uh... ok?" until I read your post about it. Overall, nicely written and I overall enjoyed reading it. It had a good tone that made me interested in seeing where it was going. Usually I like weird awkward twists and endings, but I was a bit confused but now that I know there'll be more to it, I'm looking forward to see where this story develops.
c-bikle. Favorite. What are your picks?
Oh... never mind on cbikle, then. Didn't realize he voted for me.
OK, congrats to Zepster for his winning entry, Roadtrip and the next contest will be posted as soon as Zepster sends me his theme for the next one.