I'm working on a comic called The Call that I may end up submitting a proposal for with a very skilled artist - this is a basic draft of the plot. This is the first draft, done in cartoon form because I find that's the easiest way for me to quickly get ideas down. Right now I'm looking for plot holes and questions about what's there. As writers you might find it less confusing than others, and have more to say so please do! Peace

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KAtTjPlfBhw