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[netwrk219]

Although I am just an amateur myself, I believe that your foreground should be heavier as far as line weight is concerned.

Please, someone correct me if I'm wrong.

You're right, things closer will generally "feel" heavier and therefore have thicker weighted lines.

Microns at good for ruled objects in a drawing, but as a general rule, they tend to stunt the action. If you're going to go all on as a comic book artist, then make the full commitment ad learn to use a brush. Or if you'd like to keep more control, use a hunts 102 and 107. There are numerous tips for different styled effects. The nibs allow for a brush like feel with the control of a pen.

Again, good luck.

[leemilewski]

I got that mixed up actually, I meant to say that the other way around concerning the background/foreground. You're 100% correct though, I definitely need to work on my line weight, I just have noticed alot of improvement within the recent months that I haven't really noticed much of the little things.

By tilted, I mean that the "camera" position isn't directly centered in the hallway, but is placed more towards the left. And after discussing this, I can certainly see that it overall looks wrong.

I have tried brushes before. In fact, I own several "pocket-brushes", which I like because there's no clean up. I agree that it's a good thing to learn, especially considering my stuff doesn't have alot of kinetic energy going on, but still, I've seen awesome stuff with just pens. Not to say that I wouldn't be able to learn from the use of them, or that my work wouldn't improve with them, but for now I just have them on the back burner.

I appreciate the interest in the pages though, it's a constant learning process and I think the comics community, especially, understands that people need that interest and advice to grow. So thanks guys! haha