Some new pages

**virtuabutch** · 07-09-2012, 04:04 AM

Working on some new pages!

**robozo** · 07-09-2012, 06:01 AM

first of all, these pages are good, just as the last ones i saw, i have this feeling you are quiet close to becoming very good:

1. storytelling and layout are good, you do know that you can compose pages in a more efficient way by using a splash shot and then building the rest of the page around it, do you?

2. the finish is (still) a bit corny, just make that shading a bit more detailed, its not hard, look how finch makes those muscles pop out.

3.faces are a problem, you should start to copy photos as a reference, after a while you wont need em anymore. time to improve this one mate!!

4. your pages look the same as they did monts ago, the overall look is very good, but when it comes to details its a bit lame.
i have suggestet before to concentrate a while on making the figure drawing exellent, then doing pages by first layouting them, and then paste in one pin up figure after the other. its a bit unorthodox, but it helps to improve the lack of cool detail.

its your figuredrawing that needs some polishing, then it will be exellent!

of course this is just my opinion.

greetings robozo

**Walril** · 07-09-2012, 10:21 AM

I wasn't gonna respond but couldn't help it. Seriously? Did you just break down this guys pages with words like lame, yoour figure drawing needs some polishing, etc?

How about posting some of your stuff. I say this after your 10 years of illustration yet you know nothing about the industry by your recent threads.

Seriously man. Some of us would kill to draw like this. If you post your stuff, you better be a professional and just trolling.

**robozo** · 07-09-2012, 10:32 AM

is my language to rouhg? sorry, really , i didnt mean it, but didnt i say the pages are good?

about posting my stuff, no problem, where can i upload it? im no poser, i can draw, not the best in the world, but ok, just tell me where and how i can upload my stuff?

**Walril** · 07-09-2012, 10:38 AM

Plenty of image hosting places to upload. DeviantArt, Facebook, tumblr, imgr (i think thats what its called).

**robozo** · 07-09-2012, 10:40 AM

sorry again, i didnt mean to be arrogant, its just my character, i am a direct person,wanted to encourage him, i have a account on DA, what do i have to do?

**Walril** · 07-09-2012, 10:48 AM

I probably jumped the gun myself so no worries. Just start a thread in the appropriate forum and click on the image button and paste the URL.

you can use [img] URL TO IMAGE [/img] too