first of all, these pages are good, just as the last ones i saw, i have this feeling you are quiet close to becoming very good:
1. storytelling and layout are good, you do know that you can compose pages in a more efficient way by using a splash shot and then building the rest of the page around it, do you?
2. the finish is (still) a bit corny, just make that shading a bit more detailed, its not hard, look how finch makes those muscles pop out.
3.faces are a problem, you should start to copy photos as a reference, after a while you wont need em anymore. time to improve this one mate!!
4. your pages look the same as they did monts ago, the overall look is very good, but when it comes to details its a bit lame.
i have suggestet before to concentrate a while on making the figure drawing exellent, then doing pages by first layouting them, and then paste in one pin up figure after the other. its a bit unorthodox, but it helps to improve the lack of cool detail.
its your figuredrawing that needs some polishing, then it will be exellent!
of course this is just my opinion.