Reply With QuoteIt's good. But the bottom of the shoes seem weird. I don't know if it's the coloring style or the way they were drawn. Overall it's a very nice style though.
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I haven't been here for a while. I'm working on subtle poses. The inking needs work, which is something I'll keep working on.
Last edited by Duhburger; 07-07-2012 at 07:44 PM.
It's good. But the bottom of the shoes seem weird. I don't know if it's the coloring style or the way they were drawn. Overall it's a very nice style though.
The shoulders and head are good, you captured the turning torso really well. Her hips are too round however, you've got her left leg overlapping her right leg a little bit, which should be the other way around because her right side is closer to us than the left side. A few folds in the clothing around her butt and hamstrings would have been good maybe. her butt is too high, it's almost like we're looking up at it from below while the rest of her is eye-level. Her feet are just confusing. It shouldn't be too hard to find a pose for reference like this on the web, so find something look at for the lower part of her body. Overall, her upper half is great, if you can translate that to her bottom half as well, it will be a really great image!
cool, thanks for the crit
hey...why not just link the image?
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