July pummel training camp

[tudore]

So we meet again, Mr. Human feet.

Moving on to putting together color tests, then returning to correct anatomy and add in addition details before inking. I'd appreciate if someone could point out things I seem to have overlooked. I made Fury slightly slimmer because she was looking somewhat masculine as thick as she was, but I think she needs to have that strong jawline.

[Diesel]

Looking great so far, tudore. I think her left arm (our right) is a little long (compare elbows with the other). I'd also elongate her waist by lowering her hips a little; that will make her more feminine looking. I think that if you made her bottom lip more pronounced it would make her more feminine looking also (something I am working on this month myself).

Also, what is Amos 5:29?

[tudore]

@ Diesel: Thanks for the advice. I think I'll straighten that arm out more.
Amos 5:24 is a bible verse [righteousness/water; justice/mighty stream.]
Working on accentuating feminine traits in general or Fury specifically?

[Diesel]

I'm working on accentuating feminine features. One of my women last month looked grossly masculine apparently. I don't know/ remember Fury at all. I'll have to look her up. I am using Amazing Man in my drawing this month!

[tudore]

Well, if you feel like posting it, I'd be glad to return the favor.
[Fury's part of the young all-stars.]

[tudore]

The lessons of color test one:
- Darker blood
- More Viridian in the waves
- orange-yellow in the clouds, no red
- Colorless blender: useful, but limited applications
- lower hips will accentuate femininity
Anything else?

[dreno360]

Got two days to wrap it up ...

[tudore]

@ dreno: this looks really cool, but there are some issues with the left arm: that vein looks a little too prominent, and the curve where the tricep inserts going towards the elbow is a little too severe. His sword seems to merge with knee guard of the individual standing behind him.

[dreno360]

@ dreno: this looks really cool, but there are some issues with the left arm: that vein looks a little too prominent, and the curve where the tricep inserts going towards the elbow is a little too severe. His sword seems to merge with knee guard of the individual standing behind him.

noted on all accounts. Thanks for the feedback.

[ReggieR3mote]

Super close to done, but any last minute feedback would be awesome thanks guys. topic = steampunk