Battle Chasers - Pummel

[Teratophile]

I plan going to re-coloring this and adding the background I sketched.

[mikeorion22]

each character is drawn individually very well but i dont think they work well together. the composistion is symetrical having gully and calebreto in the center then garrison to one side then nolan on the other. they also seem to be getting ready for something different. calebreto looks like he might be getting ready for a fight straight ahead and gully is just looking off into the distance another direction, garrison is just looking at us with a cool pose and nolan seems to be concerned with something off the page to the right. i think each character by themselves would work better, you're obviously very skilled and you have some great stuff on your blog. i dont mean to be harsh, i like your work.

[Teratophile]

No, you're absolutely right. I drew each character on separate 11 x 17 paper. I knew it was going to be a pain in the ass to put together.

[scmarooney]

I love that penciled version, Ray, it would be awesome to see you drop in a detailed background of some sort behind that!

[InkDrop]

Love the lines. But composition needs work as stated. Just throw Red's boobs with some red hair falling betwixt them for a background.

[dreno360]

Very clean looking, I was looking forward to your finished piece and you did not disappoint at all!

[Teratophile]

Thanks guys. I'm going to add the background...is there any suggestions for improving the composition?

[sirandal]

What if you moved Garrison to the left side as is and flipped Nolan and moved him to the right side...would that be crazy?

[Whune]

I'd comment much more on stuff people do...
if other people hadn't already said exactly what I was going to say.

(that's happened to me a lot today)

[Teratophile]

What if you moved Garrison to the left side as is and flipped Nolan and moved him to the right side...would that be crazy?

I tried that! I drew garrison facing left and flipped it. I also drew him in a more action pose but i wasn't feeling any of it.