I am torn over this. Dan3000 chose to submit sequentials, which implies there's a story to be told. As we can see, however, there really isn't much story there. Reggie did submit a superior story, no question. The fact remains, however, this is visual storytelling. If the visuals aren't adding to the story, they're detracting from it. Dan3000's visuals do nothing to detract from what little story is there, and they're kinda nice to boot. If I were to vote for Reggie based solely on the story, then by that same logic I would have to vote Reggie down for someone else who submitted 20 pages of incredible story, with terrible art (not saying your art is terrible here, Reggie, but in this case I see quantity first). My vote goes to Dan3000.