Willet, I really like what you were doing with your storytelling. I feel like you were going for the more technically complicated piece. I like all of the little touches you added- the brown ink, the rough edges- which made your piece look older. I think maybe you were trying to do too much with it, though.
Spiderguts, I really like the design on your sea monster, and how clean and clear your line work is. The composition works well, a shade traditional for the subject matter but there is a reason for that. Nice work.