So my question is this: When I wrote the initial rough draft, it included an additional page as sort of an epilogue, showing them disposing of the van, then Adam kills the driver, and basically kicks back, proud of a job well done. Now that I'm doing the final draft it feels like that last page would seem superfluous, but I'm not sure if it feels complete just like this. I don't know if I feel that way just because I have that epilogue in my mind, or it genuinely needs something more to close it out. Thoughts? Ideas? Critiques on the script as it is? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks in advance!