First 2 pages of my X-Factor samples

[hdub]

Any and all comments/Critiques welcome.

Here's page 1


page 2

[Apollo]

Maybe try an establishing shot of the city or a close up facial expression of one of the characters like Wolverine looking determined/focused. That way you can pull out with the camera to the BIG reveal of him and the team facing off against a enemy. At the moment the audience kind of gets thrown into it.

[crazyjedichicken]

very nice work but i think you should check out loston wallaces' tutorial on hand drawn sound effects! it would make the explosion panel really pop!