PRM MW Jeloschi Vs. Aabh Technology vs. Magic

[Aabh]

Jeloschi:



Aabh:

[Aabh]

(It's one minute late because of unfamiliarity of the polling thing )

[Pep]

Sweet work Aabh! I like how the colors appear as the music starts.

[Emperorsteele]

Jel: I'm sorry to see that your piece is unfinished, it looked like it could have been killer! Though I've stated before my disdain of characters facing away from the action just so they can face us. What you have here is good, but I just can't get into it with Harry trying to cast spells behind himself...

Aahb: While this isn't the absolute best art I've ever seen you do (The radio is hugely inconsistent to the point of distraction), i love the paneling, transitions, effects, and even the shapes of the pages! This is VERY good story-telling, so you get my vote, hands-down. Though... why's her spell a bunch of numbers? o_O

[Aabh]

Thank you, Steele re: not my best showing art-wise, Simply: I underestimated the time it would take. More complexly: I had originally planned a 3 page sequential rolling out of the last fight, which two weeks should have been more than enough time for... and then I got a "It doesn't make sense" from a number of people (I wasted a few extra days trying to salvage the 3-pager)... so at 10 days to deadline, it all got thrown out... I had to restart from square one... AND I had 6 pages (!)... I was literally still drawing at 9:45 last night with my wife sitting quietly OOOOZING the "Your time is running out! Post it! Post it!" from every pore... I simply had to sacrifice my artwork to complete the story (Because I knew one page or half a story wouldn't have been enough against Jeloshi's sequentials). Re: Numbers, Hum... My fake languages DO always look the same... like a bunch of numbers... Weird. I never noticed that before... Okay, I'll do something about that

Jeloshi: Man... you know how you set up before a fight imagining what the opponent is going to do? I was totally gunning for your sequentials! I like this piece, and the characterization is solid. I wish it was inked, man!

[Aabh]

Thanks, Pep! I totally didn't mean to exclude your post!

[Jeloschi]

Aabh: I know, I totally had ha cool fight scene in mind with a Gandalf-is wizard fighting an Iron Man-ish character, but I just didn't have time to pull it off, and I had several false starts that turned into nothing, I started doodling Harry Potter a few days ago and this is what you get. Sorry I couldn't give you a better fight, cause yours turned out great!