Great stuff. I especially love the BG on that Spidey piece - really draws ya into it.
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Great stuff. I especially love the BG on that Spidey piece - really draws ya into it.
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Thank you! Did that Spidey one with an optical mouse_
if you want crits its difficult with a pic dump like this. I could write a book with all your work, you should stick to one to three max. So I liked the Deadpool pic the best. The rest have a lot of stiff poses, and misproportions, example Surfer's head is too big. I get dizzy looking at the spidey pic--bk is good, spidey, he looks doughy, nothing like your Deadpool in showing the musculature. Why are you drawing with a mouse? Isn't drawing hard enough.
Thanks for taking time out to comment Jal-EL !
I dont quite follow along with the stiff poses comment Goku isnt stiff_ Vegeta is supposed to be rigid in that pose_Spidey is anything but_ an Hellboy he's just causally standing there. Unless you mean dynamic... in which that I understand.
The Spiderman is an older piece I didnt have a tablet yet_
I would like to improve in the proportions area_ when you get some time please point out some specifics!
What software did you use to draw these?
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An example of proportions would be Silver Surfer's head being too large. You could probably reduce the size of his head quite a bit. And also reduce the hand size a bit on his right arm since it should be forshortened into the background a bit. IMO, that Silversurfer piece would be the strongest of the bunch if you fixed those proportion issues.
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How do you feel about me drawing roughly over some of these pieces?
I promise it will get you to another level faster then explaining it.
(I had some pros do this to my work at conventions a long time ago, it really works)
JussaArtGuy ; Thank you! It takes forever ! Here are a few more I did with the optical before that spiderman_
Ace Corona; Whats up Ace_ just photoshop cs2
dfbovey: Hows it Going_Thanks! The Silver Surfer is the most recent piece out of the lot_ then came the Cyclops_ that one is painted from scratch no pencils underneath. First one too_ The Hellboy came before that and the DBZ pieces are older by a couple of years_ I think 2009. I will make adjustments to the Surfer on render level.
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