Reply With QuoteI think he looks too calm and serene for lifting something heavy. Also, his lower body should be angling more forward. The way you have it the torso and the legs aren't matching up. When the body twists that's ok. But here it looks improperly done.
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I think he looks too calm and serene for lifting something heavy. Also, his lower body should be angling more forward. The way you have it the torso and the legs aren't matching up. When the body twists that's ok. But here it looks improperly done.
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cheers for the reply! the torso- i can kind of see what you mean and ill try and fix it as best i can!
The expression- i left it looking calm cause it's colossus and he could lift that crap in his sleep! thanks again and hopefully i'll be back soon with some improvements!
re-thought the whole thing!
Nice. I like that one much more. I like how his shoulders are hunched and he looks like he's actually holding something up.
Pummel Record
Wins = 10
losses = 19
KO Win = 7
I am the Gatekeeper
cheers i work on it more tonight!
I sent you a PM with my crits.
thanks for the crits morganza! i'd already done this by the time i'd read them though! dammit! will hopefully re-do it soon!
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