Art Sequentials Samples

[Ebayson]

(night fingers) Just cramped not broken, lol. You got me there, Thanks.

[InkedT]

I didn't even notice the right foot until it was mentioned. It does look a little off.

[Ebayson]

yup, yup. Thanks.

[scottf]

I like the total world feel of this comic. I like the way the protagonist looks, all glossy skin, like silver surfer. I like the way there is no text to lead the story, it feels good looking at the order of the panels. My eye just follows this presentation. The only part I don't like, that maybe photoshop could even fix, is that the contrast is so high between black inked parts and the white space, that I feel it hard to see what goes where, my eyes are overgorged in ink and can't see the whole for the parts. Maybe this last part is just the levels of photoshop, but it does seem like it detracts from the awesome spirit of this production.

thanks for your wonderful artwork,
Scott McLay Forbes
revealedspaces@gmail.com

[Ebayson]

The only part I don't like, that maybe photoshop could even fix, is that the contrast is so high between black inked parts and the white space, that I feel it hard to see what goes where, my eyes are overgorged in ink and can't see the whole for the parts. Maybe this last part is just the levels of photoshop, but it does seem like it detracts from the awesome spirit of this production.

(scottf) Hey man, thanks a lot for taking the time, I'll be keeping that in mind in my future projects.