Hey, CrazyD! Glad to see you jumping into PUMMEL! This is an interesting and somewhat eclectic mix of illustrations! I like the second one most of all for storytelling purposes and because of the interesting characters and the addition of the rooftop environment. I think it also demonstrates an understanding of perspective.
I voted Middleweight here due to the current high level of competition in that division. Welcome to PUMMEL and I look forward to seeing what you are going to bring every month to the competition!