Reply With QuoteHere's the final for page 2. Had some craziness that kept me from working on it but knocked it out tonight.
Here's the final for page 2. Had some craziness that kept me from working on it but knocked it out tonight.
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Here's the final for page 2. Had some craziness that kept me from working on it but knocked it out tonight.
See my work on the Game of Thrones season 2 Bluray features "Legends and Lore"
My Deviant Art Page
PUMMEL Statistics: Wins: 22 Losses: 3 Knockouts: 15
Six Time Heavyweight Champion - Original Tournament Winner - 5 Time Hall of Fame inductee
Nice job on that page 2, Dave! I like the way you are altering the "camera" angles in every panel.
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I really like that page with the tilt. Big. Fan of what you do, and will be watching this closely. I remember those older pages for this, and thought they were several notches below what you are capable of. These new pages are a huge improvement. Can't wait to see some action pages. That's were you always shine.
Nice Work Dave
Thanks a lot
Sloth's pace continues. Page 3 in progress...
See my work on the Game of Thrones season 2 Bluray features "Legends and Lore"
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PUMMEL Statistics: Wins: 22 Losses: 3 Knockouts: 15
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Like really a lot how you are re doing these pages! Your composition is very good and you are using camera angles very well.
Not totally clear what's going on in the last page tho...it seems to me a storm suddenly happen andwho's the guy with the knife?
Thanks a lot Simone! There will be a series of cut away scenes to this guy with the knife running for his life. The group is actually talking about him (and how he'll come home safe), the girl with the headset is his romantic interest. The previous page, the last panel is actually the first cut away shot of him running.
See my work on the Game of Thrones season 2 Bluray features "Legends and Lore"
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PUMMEL Statistics: Wins: 22 Losses: 3 Knockouts: 15
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The page has great art and is nicely designed.
Storytelling wise I'm having confusion.
It looks like the guy with the knife is flying or falling, however definitely not running based on his center of gravity.
Is he hacking through the brush? The knife is too small for that. And I don't think you can hack while running.
Even with the text, I don't think these things will be explained.
Every time the reader is confused or has questions about what's going on then they are taken out of the story.
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Thanks, hopefully some of the issues will be ironed out by the dialogue, The main thing I'm concerned about is the jumping from the main scene to the scene where the dude is deeper in the jungle. When I look at the page and read the dialogue it seems to flow well.
The next cut panel on the next page he's actually tumbling to the ground. He's suppose to be frantically running for his life. It's not a casual jog and he's not supposed to look balanced.
Here's the final for page 3.
See my work on the Game of Thrones season 2 Bluray features "Legends and Lore"
My Deviant Art Page
PUMMEL Statistics: Wins: 22 Losses: 3 Knockouts: 15
Six Time Heavyweight Champion - Original Tournament Winner - 5 Time Hall of Fame inductee
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