PSF Trampis vs fcoesquivel, Thor

**Dann** · 02-21-2012, 02:50 PM

Originally Posted by fcoesquivel

The first version of my illustration had bigger issues, Pep, thor's chest was smaller and the arm that's about to grasp his hammer was some how "misplaced", unfortunately I had done my inking when I notice this big errors since deadline was close I was unable to do a newest piece. I fix it by sticking white light opaline paper on it and redrawing the arm and the chest leaving the trolls and rest of thor's body untouched.
For those who still work his artwork directly on paper, how deal with errors -big ones- on a working piece, besides redoing the all thing?

Lotsa white out!!

**Electronick** · 02-21-2012, 04:06 PM

Trampis I like your strong lighting, it's just the composition feels a little off balance. Some whites in the lower right corner, and maybe a bit over Thor's left (our right) shoulder would even things out I think.

Fco, great composition - the monster faces are fun, and I really like the area of Thor's hammer and outstretched arm. And yeah, what Dann said about whiteout. You can still ink over it as long as you're not too rough with it.

**immigrant** · 02-21-2012, 07:16 PM

good stuff both pieces..thinking ...

**Sedani** · 02-22-2012, 01:19 PM

Both of these were taken from Asgard itself, it was a tough decision

**dfbovey** · 02-22-2012, 02:06 PM

I like the positive negative space play in Trampis' and the action of FCo's. If Trampis had included some kind of environment or background I probably would have gone his way. But in the end I voted FCO.