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[mjcurry7294]

This was a short story I did for my final project in college. Thought you guy would enjoy.


Edit: someone said it was hard to see... If you're having trouble seeing it, you can always just read it here on my old DA

http://supermichaelman.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d32fhm9

[Electronick]

Wow so that's some heavy stuff there. Is this an autobiography of sorts? Just curious - you named your character after yourself.

[mjcurry7294]

Wow so that's some heavy stuff there. Is this an autobiography of sorts? Just curious - you named your character after yourself.

Yes it is, I wasent really sure what to think of it

[NickRocks]

I like it alot!

[khmer]

Jeez. That's bleek. If this was rendered realistically it'd be way too heavy to swallow. That it's a cute rabbit with big glassy eyes makes it work well for conveying the story. I find myself really wanting to put my arm around the little fella and offer him some pointers on how get a chic and keep her. Sheesh.

The two things I didn't care for...

1) the lettering... inconsistent and made it tad tedious to read.

2) the overview map of the house/location is a hard read

This character/story could really go somewhere... it's something that tons can identify with. It really taps into the whole empathy/sympathy vibe. That's always a good thing in story telling.

[Symson]

Very Powerful.

[Bryan E.Warner]

How are you doing now Michael ?....
I'm usually not into real simple art-work...but this is an exception..Good Work Kiddo!

[hydekomiksink]

Simply AWESOME! And seeing how good you're stuff is - I can't believe you doubt yourself so much. I know we are our own worse critics, but man I've enjoyed your stuff for so long.