Dean, thanks very much for the crit and the very nice compliment. I'm really looking forward to applying all the things I've learned from the crits I've received on these pages to my next samples and to any pages I do in the meantime. I'm very pleased that these samples got close enough for the crits to get more focused. People have been saying I'm "close" for a while, but I think I've finally proved it. Only a couple more hurdles, I hope. Again, thanks for the input - it's always appreciated.