Donnstar: Weigh - In (L)

[Electronick]

[Donnstar]

Unfortunately, the fact that you're coming across as the 'new troll on the forum' means that I, for one, find it hard to give your artwork any serious consideration.

I would imagine that many others are thinking the same thing.

ergo argo, there is nothing to say is there?

I find it hard to believe that I'm trolling so hard that all your sense flies out the window and none of you guys can think of anything to critique. Bullshit. if you see any faults, point them out. Don't come in here, piss in my lemonade and try and sell it for 25 cents. I came here to improve, not to waste time calling little shitheads out.

[Pep]

Donnstar, I think you came in on the wrong foot. I would happily try and give some advice but with this heat I'm not going to bother because it'll probably get shot down anyway. I don't think it's fair either to count you out before you've had your chance. If you have the geist and the guts to start streetfights, join pummel and above all check your personal ego at the door I think you'll be more than welcome and apprechiated for every effort you put in. If you would consider this another way and continue badmouthing other pummelers it won't be beneficial or constructive to anyone and you're running a high risk of not getting called on street fights. (It seems part of your joining pummel is giving it your best shot and finding out what you can improve on?) Sure this is a 'fight club' or sorts but with it comes a certain set of rules and the first one in my book basically boils down to: behave and respect your peers and opponents.

Anyone want to start from scratch again and let bygones be bygones?

[ScorpioReport]

1st pic: I like what I'm seeing but it goes awry at the waist, not sure if you were attempting foreshortening or force perspective but the character's right leg appears to be longer then the left leg...that being said I like the muscle work on the upper body...

2nd pic: Is standard webcomic fare, its not bad but it really doesn't showcase any storytelling ability, the only thing i can really judge it on is content...which in this case is not for me...

3rd Pic: Not bad but its very flat, I understand using flatness as a design element ...but in this piece it makes it look boring...plus the characters flame thrower back pack kinda blends into the background, greater line weights would of helped with the depth perception....

Hope that helped

[Donnstar]

Thanks that does help. I'll respond more indepth as soon as I finish my homework

[ChrisMcJunkin]

LETS GET READY TO RUMBLLEEEEEE.

Finally we got all the big talkers in.

Listen, enough of this one month drawing bullshit. I want to set up a one week marathon. I'll post up a topic about what I want.


Also for all this smack talk i've yet to here some constructive critique. Just "cartoony" this. "bad style this". Let me tell you something asshole that said 'bad style'.

You wouldn't know style if it crawled up your ass and laid eggs. I will put you over my knee and break you. I would challenge you, but I don't find your skill all that substantive. So you keep that shit.

Yo, I'm the "asshole" that said "bad style." You want to talk smack go ahead and live up, noob. The fact that I count at least five Heavyweights that are calling you on your crap and a number of others who are dancing around it. I could give a rat's ass what you think of me or my work. I've gotten props and crits alike from people that would knock you out cold and in my time here, I've only encountered a small number of people like yourself. So go ahead and make a big stink, try your best to troll as many people as you can, people who will attempt to treat you with respect that you won't bother returning, and then go away like the rest all eventually do.

[Juggertha]

MOD MODE

Ok, just to be clear here - Donnstar, since you've come into pummel, you've done nothing but talk smack. And while a good amount of good natured ribbing is welcome here, your use of vulgarities is not.

I was willing to let the racial slurs and profanity in your art slide because it had a theme (internet trolling - anyone else catching that part of this?), but your use of such words in your posts is not welcome here. Clean up your language.

I'm closing this thread. It's obvious that you're either heading into the light weights or heading for a ban. Its your choice which path you want to take.

Choose.