SF wip, favortie 80's horror villain/monster etc

[pigeonmilk]

Throwing up my WIP for my SF With Electron. Wanted some CNC about it before i really starting cranking out and droppin some serious Bows.

Alot of BG elements not there yet, but this is the overal layout. Not really liking his walking foot, doesnt feel right to me.

[Electronick]

Haha nice. I considered Michael, too. I think it may look better if you make his front foot the "walking" foot. Heel down, tip up, so you get that forward movement.

[Popninja]

I would suggest much less detail on the mask. Other than that, this is looking like it's going to come out real nice.

[pigeonmilk]

thanks guys!! I made the change, i have him standing just looking at the severed head.

[pigeonmilk]

Updated WIP of the pic. hitting digital inks soon

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

his legs seem quite short, or his upper body is too big one of the two.

[pigeonmilk]

Thanks TK, you are right about those legs, i was feeling the same way. I lengthed them out some.

Here is the current status, with updated colors

Decided to go straight colors, no lineart. please CNC on this

[Electronick]

Awesome - I was hoping you were gonna color this! I love all the extra detail on the ground, because it really sells the location and atmosphere. Looking good so far.

[pigeonmilk]

thanks man!, I knew that I would have to do colors going up against you.

I have big plans for this pic, and I hope I can pull em off. I'm glad you made this till 25th,lol I'm going to need the time.

[Beastie]

In your earlier version his feet were turned outwards slightly more. That looked more natural.

I would be careful to make sure the handle of his knife is a very different colour from the colour of his hand. You may very well be moving towards that - but I just thought I'd mention it.