The reason I need a larger scanner

[eeweathers]

I took an hour out of my day today and sketched this. I'll be honest I stole the pose from Kenneth Rocafort's blog, but hey, I gotta learn! This is in my sketchbook which is 11x14 and therefore I was unable to scan I'm happy with how it turned out and I'd love some comments and crits or even ideas on where to go next on the piece. Thanks!

[MrArtlegence]

Looks good man. When i saw it looked familiar but yeah i see it. Kenneth Rocafort.
The only comment i leave you is the eyes a little dead but he body is rocking.

keep it up.

[The P.R. Man]

Go to a ups store or fedex or something similar, theyll scan it and email it to you for a buck.

The girl looks cool, the styles slightly different from your other stuff ive seen, but i like it. Not a fan of her right hand hiding behind her head, looks like the handles sticking out of her head. Her left arm is too skeletal, and when compaired to her slim waist and hips and her largish boobs looks wierd,

Consider putting either some more meat on her or dropping her to an A cup. I love the meatier chicks as much as i love the skinny ones, but mixing their parts together moves dangerously into the liefeldian zone.

[eeweathers]

I'll try to fix those things, thanks for the input!

[LazNovak]

This looks pretty good. The proportions are a bit funky. Too long and too thin and her face is too square. Also, based on the angle of her left forearm, her upper arm should have the bicep facing in towards her body throwing the anatomy on the entire arm off.

Great job overall though.