TB2-R1: brokenhill vs TGping

[fatmancomics]

Steve, I too couldn't tell what was going on in your composition. I had to see your opponent's comp to recognize the characters in yours so TGPing got my vote. I think you have to work on your line weights.

[TGping]

Way to bring the pain Brokenhill

[Whune]

Thanks for all the good words guys,Whune just what do you mean? I dont have the tech skill that most have here but I dont draw Bull Sh&T.Maybe color would have made it more clear but i dont color,maybe i'll breakout the prisma pencil next time.

I mean like lines... and stuff... just in there.
being part of the reason it's hard to tell what's going on.

A lot of good artists do it on purpose; and it works;
but it works because it adds to the composition (balances positive and negative space)
rather than detracts from it: confusing the composition.

sorry I was less clear and more harsh in how I said it.
unfortunately for some reason I assumed you knew exactly what I was talking about; so I didn't elaborate.

[Whune]

Steve, I too couldn't tell what was going on in your composition. I had to see your opponent's comp to recognize the characters in yours so TGPing got my vote. I think you have to work on your line weights.

I think his assessment is more accurate than mine.