Wow Electronicron thats some nice work on the rock man! the shades really make him pop!
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Really awesome street fights going on. Electronicon, I love the finished piece! Lingling, I like your closeup, too.
Wow, really shocked at how the voting is going on this one. Lingling's piece- the eyes, the expression- although not done with photo quality rendering, is probably one of the most living breathing portrayal's of the Thing I remember ever seeing. This looks like a character that could actually exist. Nicely done.
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Both did an awesome job, but I like Elec's more. His full body capture and awesome smooth colors really blend well to give us a mellow personal intake on this troubled little guy. Ling's brings out more of the human in Grim, but I need more than a facial although the colors are nicely executed!
Good work Guys But i had to go with Electronicron love the mood of your art.
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Also big thanks to Lingling, who got me into my first street fight. Here's to many more.
I don't get what's going on with Electronicron's piece at all, but it's clearly the better piece so I voted for it.
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PRO- The eyes say it all: "tortured, sad, determined, intense, powerful, etc". Though not drawn with a surgeon's precision, they emote very well to the viewer. In fact, you almost were able to tell just as much of a story as your opponent with a simple glare (assuming that the viewer is familiar with Ben's background story though). Also the distance between the nose and the mouth is just about dead-on for The Thing.
PRO- The choice to place the head off-center is a good one here.
PRO- The soft shadows really lend to the implied "stone-like" surface.
CON- I seems a little underdeveloped. A polished or cleaned-up presentation would have skyrocketed this piece for me.
CON- The Thing doesn't have ears or any remaining form of them, but your depiction seems to have some residual ear mass left. Not a sin, just a little strange looking for the character if we are going for an on-model Thing here.
CON- Though also a pro in some ways, this is still just a dead-on shot of Thing's face with little else to offer the viewer other than a very well done stare. In the way of being dynamic enough to compete with another piece, such a static shot is oftentimes a risky choice.
Overall: This is a strong close up of Thing that definitely is not empty of emotion or intensity, but sharpening finishing-skills will add so much value to your already fantastic piece!!!
PRO- Good scene that shows a little of Ben's background (Yancy Street) and personality/interests (the coat, the cigar, the dropped paper about Doom).
PRO- You show him in mid-stride which gives us the feel that he is headed somewhere with a purpose.
PRO- Good that your line weights are heavier at the bottom of his "rocks" to show the light source from above (outdoors). It gives him a 3D quality.
CON- I'm not a fan of how muddy/blurry the colors are. Thats just me.
CON- Is that a shadow or just the street below him? It's not really clear to me so that seems a bit underdeveloped either way. A hard shadow would have looked nice.
Overall: I really like the scene here and your more polished illustration!!!
So the "W" goes to Electronicron for me. Great work from both artists though!