New Jukebox Heroes Page
Another page for my new comic- not a whole lot to say, except that I'm trying to make more varied panel layouts and more interesting color choices. I may or may not keep the characters monochromatic, it's just a thing I'm experimenting with. What do yuo all think?
Yeah, the color choices are really working without being overbearing or clashing. The monochromatic thing works here..I'd probably have it on a scene by scene basis instead of sticking to it as a hard and fast rule through the whole book.
Stroytelling wise, just from this page I'd recommend zooming out every so often to show character relation instead of having people just pop up (Bryan Lee O'malley has a bit of a problem with this too, as much as I love him). The big guy just seems to come out of nowhere...but the previous page probably establishes that? The pacing/body language is really working, though.