View Full Version : Red Sonja - President
08-20-2009, 12:21 PM
re-do's of my first post on this forum...I did some new Star Wars one's but I like my Sonja re-do's better then those so here these be.....
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/4757/redsonjapg12009.jpg (http://img195.imageshack.us/i/redsonjapg12009.jpg/)http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/redsonjapg12009.jpg/1/w653.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img195/redsonjapg12009.jpg/1/)
08-20-2009, 12:21 PM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4296/redsonjapg22009.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/i/redsonjapg22009.jpg/)http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/redsonjapg22009.jpg/1/w656.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img210/redsonjapg22009.jpg/1/)
08-20-2009, 12:22 PM
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/1417/redsonjapg32009.jpg (http://img193.imageshack.us/i/redsonjapg32009.jpg/)http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/redsonjapg32009.jpg/1/w661.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img193/redsonjapg32009.jpg/1/)
08-20-2009, 12:32 PM
i like them a lot dude, i think you captured the sexiness and aggression of the character well. love to see more :)
08-20-2009, 02:31 PM
You have clearly worked very hard at this and you have refined rendering skills. However, I think that Sonja is too masculine in her arms in the big splash shots and in the last panel, her arm proportions are way off -- her forearm is too thin to be attached to that bicep. Tone down the musculature and this will look a lot better. Sonja in Panel 1 on Pg2 looks more cartoony than the rest of the pages. Pg2 panel4 looks very unrealistic to me -- no silicon implants in the Hyborian Age ;-)
I like your shading and use of black and your layouts are OK. It would be nice to actually see what is going on on the last page rather than the implicit point of view.
Overall, this is quite impressive work. Keep at it -- you have lots of potential!
08-20-2009, 06:31 PM
I like these man. The only thing that slightly bothers me are the solid blacks....but those could and would be dealt with during inking. I agree with Jedi on the musculature of her arms....just a smidge toned down.
What I'm really upset with however, is the fact that you've been a member since 2007 and you have a single digit post count. Man post more stuff!! These are good.
08-20-2009, 06:33 PM
cant go wrong with boob swings
08-20-2009, 09:55 PM
I really like this. Very nice work.
08-21-2009, 12:38 PM
I agree I should post more but then I go through the work of Imageshack and posting on forums and Quotes with multiquotes ...it just ends up with me thinking I should stick to Deviantart...I'll try though to keep up with multiple ones...Thanks...
08-23-2009, 01:27 PM
If my memory doesn't fail me that pose on the 4th panel with swinging boobs was copied from Frank Cho's Shanna.
The figures are pretty irregular like you've been taking ref from various artists trying to fit in one comic.
Some scenes would have much more movement if you just tilt the BG horizon line. Also the BG is flattened with the trees lined like that some roots around and different size an form to them would have made this much better
Your notion of comic shade is good.
08-24-2009, 05:42 AM
Wow, amazing work. Love the shading, the shoulder plate armor was confusing me, I thought she became elvin in a few of the panels. The boobs and muscle should be toned down a bit as mentioned before, but over all...you're incredibly talented.
08-24-2009, 01:39 PM
Lots of good effort here...I think you should concentrate on being more consistant with your characters and BG rather than trying to impress a style..it almost looks like several different artist were working on these.the work is not bad but could be more consistant..they'er a couple of times that Sonja's shoulder armor blends in to her head and looking like elf or Spock ears.( just this old artist 2-cents )
Keep at it!
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