Kill-Shot!

[Random Hero 7]

This is a character created by me and a friend(Steve11jr) in which we called kill-shot. We created the idea and weapons 2gether, then he created the face and head, i created the rest which wasnt easy let me tell u. I researched xtream sport gear and SWAT gear to give him the secret agent look. He's also a archer, so i looked at new kinds of bow, i the bow i used is a real one i found that i simplified a lil. If u look closly at his Right eye, ull notice its a lil red. Its his robotic aiming eye that he gained while losing his real one in battle.
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww83/RME08/Picture018.jpg
P.S. Steve11jr, when u see this i bet ull get a lil excited and hope u like it. I also had the idea that u could save this pic and color it.

[steve11jr]

Hey Bobby, I think this turned out pretty sweet. I like it...Aw the things we do to pass time at work, lol.

[Random Hero 7]

hahahahahha, exactly! And hey, remember, u should and try and color it!

[Wo-Nellie]

If you don't already have one I'd suggest getting a French Curve, it's similar to protractor, basically a plastic tracing tool that will help guide your pencil so you can get better lines for things like that bow.
Anyways, this is a good team effort guys.

[ITDGage]

yeah, this is pretty good. i especially like the patch that he flips up when he needs to use the eye, that'll help keep him incognito when he's not in costume, it's a nice touch.

[dxdragon]

Nice work and flow. I agree the bow is off a bit.

Crits: You forgot his tricep on the extended arm, and I'd probably draw your legs lightly first and then draw the cloths afterwords, a few things look off even covered in cloth.

[steve11jr]

Hey Bobby I finally got around to putting some color on this. I didn't know what to do with the background so I just started laying some color down lol

http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae213/steve11jr/kill-shotcopy.jpg

[Wo-Nellie]

I think the background doesn't help; it's too dark and distracting, however there's never a shortage of people who disagree with me.
Ultimately, go with whatever background you like best. ;)

[Random Hero 7]

dude, only 2 words come to my mind when i see this pic... KICK-ASS!!

if i could make a few suggestions though...can we make the bow black or a dark grey? and on his B. proof vest, the area under the arm pit, right above the strips that holds the vest on, can we make that the same color as the vest? when i made it i had that in mind as part of the vest and not really the shirt. but other that dude i love the colors.and u kno wat...he kinda has a resemblence to u :D

[FIG]

The coloring part with all the black everywhere..........this is the giveaway that this is all a joke right?

[steve11jr]

FIG
The coloring part with all the black everywhere..........this is the giveaway that this is all a joke right?

What is that supposed to mean?

[PencilVillian]

If you're unsure of the background then why not just leave it blank (ie: white) instead of scribbling all over it? Now it's so dark there's many areas and details that you can't even see.

[steve11jr]

Ok, I lost the background. I thought it kinda had a cool artsy graffitti feel but what do I know

http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae213/steve11jr/kill-shotcopy-1.jpg

[Wo-Nellie]

Yeah, it actually looks better cleaned up like that. :)

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

I don't belive you guys are 19 and 21. I'm sorry I just don't. You're an okay artist but I do not belive you're 19.

[steve11jr]

Telekinetic Ketchup
I don't belive you guys are 19 and 21. I'm sorry I just don't. You're an okay artist but I do not belive you're 19.

Telekinetic Ketchup are you really questioning our age or was that a compliment that I misunderstood, lol?

[Random Hero 7]

I don't belive you guys are 19 and 21. I'm sorry I just don't. You're an okay artist but I do not belive you're 19.
come on :D lol, y would we lie about our age?