PS:F 1 hour demonspeed. Physic vs Thordad

[Physicdesigns]

Ok did a quickie one hour battle, im still slower than i thought, anyhows here it go
topic was supergirl/women whatever the kryptonian super females are called.

Physicdesigns
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v452/yinstro/power.jpg

Thordad
http://i699.photobucket.com/albums/vv357/Thordad/sg.jpg

thnak ya for the challenge my friend

[Goldenarms]

I have to say, Physic's is much cleaner and pretty articulate. Thordad's felt all kinds of strange. Supergirl's a bit boxy, and doesn't really look like she can move at all. Plus some more studying of the anatomy would be most beneficial. Sometimes, I feel like I'm reading Dark Angel from Marvel UK or Aeon Flux looking at Thordad's stuff, and I feel he could definitely pull some more stops out. Just lighten up, and flow with it.

[slam]

when you're good your good, and physics..haha..you are **** great. Not only does the drwawing look correct, it is ellegant and has style.
thordad: Not a bad drawing at all, what really messes it up is that arm raising up, it just doesn't make sense, what were you trying to portray actually? It would've been better if that arm was stretched and she was looking up, then maybe some good old fashioned manga speedlines, and you would've had a great dynamic piece. You have the goods, but you just need to work a bit more on composition and idea.

[alfred183]

For some reason I want milk lol