View Full Version : Path of The Vampire Comic
06-13-2009, 08:46 PM
This is my first comic and my first post here. Ehhh.
06-13-2009, 08:49 PM
06-14-2009, 02:10 PM
Interesting. A style worth building on. My only big buggaboo is in regards to the lettering, which I think needs to be a bit crisper and perhaps a tad larger.
06-14-2009, 02:24 PM
Not...quite sure what was going on with the skeleton bit but it was an interesting read.
06-14-2009, 02:26 PM
yeah...wtf is going on here? i dig the style, but i dont understand the story whatsoever.
06-14-2009, 06:42 PM
I have to say I agree. Reading it again, I have absolutely no idea what you're going for. You need to clarify your narrative.
06-14-2009, 07:25 PM
There appears to be a page missing at least on my computer display. This may be tripping up more than one person if they too are not seeing all of the pages. But from what I gather, Nikita and Mikey are vampiric/demon slayers. I think perhaps Mikey is "turned" on the missing page. Nikita destroys her former friend out of necessity, and perhaps she has a drug-fueled vision of him headless, or at least wearing a box in place of his smashed skull, and then we see Mikey perhaps still in Nikita's hallucination going to heaven where he meets his deceased mother.
06-15-2009, 08:37 AM
Well the artwork is certainly very intriguing and like Wo-Nellie said worth building upon. If you intended on stylizing the lettering I think you should have worked on them a little more because right now it seems like you just haphazardly scribbled the words. I get why nobody could understand what is going on but I think we just need to see the rest of the story, it certainly has me wanted to see what happens afterward, or even before these pages. Look forward to more.
06-15-2009, 11:47 PM
yeah, I'm gonna echo what everybody has said so far. The style is pretty cool. Were you inspired by 30 Days of Night??
06-17-2009, 01:20 PM
Love the artwork. You might clean up the lettering a bit, but not too much. You still want it to match the roughness of the artwork.
06-17-2009, 02:37 PM
This is good stuff. More please.
06-17-2009, 03:24 PM
uh, well it started very strong. And the art is really fun. But i think you might want to clean up the last page. it seems rushed. We lose sight of what's going on and their relationship doesn't seem to be that developed. Granted it's a 3 page story, so that's next to impossible to do there. But i would suggest spreading this out to at least 6 or 7 pages and slowing the pacing a bit. let us get to know these folks so that the deaths are effective.
Art wise though i think its a lot of fun (although again the last page seemed rushed). Keep at it! :)
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