COMMIE ZOMBIES from OUTERSPACE

[brokenhill]

Ok some of you guys had the idea that I shoud maybe do a
comic about COMMIE ZOMBIES from outerspace invading my woodland compound.
It was in the "faces behind the names" therad.
Well heres the start .I'm going to try and do at least one issue.
Now if anybody listed as guest stars does not what anthing to do with this let me know.Other wise I'll take that as you dont mind me using your names.I got a number of things draw up so ....
C&C and thanks for looking and if anybody else what to be drawn in let me know.
Obvuuily this wont be somthing I'm selling.just for fun.
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/COMICcover.jpg

[Morganza]

This is awesome, can I contribute a page?

[lost-spartan]

Sweeeeeet. :D

[hydekomiksink]

Wow man this looks like so much fun. I can't wait to see it finished. Do you know how many pages you are going for?
-I love the landing pod sequense leading to the final shot of the alien. Great job with that!

[Caimano]

If Lost_Spartan do a page I can ink it...Broken you can check how the Graves pic turned out at the end...if you like it and Todd is Ok I'll be in

[e_t_i]

Awsum! Loves it!

[CWmax]

Awesome!!!!


Cw

[lost-spartan]

I don't know how much help you want on this Steve, but you've got the start a cool community project if you wanted some outside help from atleast Morg, Simone, and myself for a page or two. And I'm sure a lot more PJ'rs would love to contribute and get in on the fun as well. ;)

[brokenhill]

Wow never thought you guys would be soo Cool with this.
Excelent.Well I have a number of sketchs for the diffrent charters and the bad guys ect. that i will post and I have a script for one whole story written up.I'd love to get as many guys and gals envoled that what too.For instance I was going to pm Morgan his charcter 2 page script.
I've got to get my dauther to type up the whloe story though.
Then ill post that with the sketchs and will go from there.
Thanks again .Ill get my ass to work.
Is that going to ok in this theard or shoud it be moved ?

[brokenhill]

Well here's the back story and cast of characters Remember that if you what to be a Character inthis let me know.Please remember I WRITE LIKE S%@T.
ANY and sug and tips .I will post the sketchs and the story FRi night or sat.

Please move this if you need too.


. The time is 2019 ,Its been 9 years scents the Commie Zombie’s came from outer space.They came by the thousand’s landing on all parts of the earth.Some nations welcomed them big mistake They overran them that much more easily .Most nations that fought, fought hard ,but it was almost a complete losing battle.The US had to move all its government to California that was president schwarzenegger decree .There they built a huge wall and any citizens that could make were told to make there way in before it was too late. This process repeated it self over and over the world as nations backed them selves into corners like frighten animals.
But out there outside the walls were groups of people ,Hard ass people that weren’t going to be pushed around,That said enough is enough.And they fought back.
With everything they had.
This is their story .

How the CZFOS came to be .

It was 1969 and while the US pursued the dream of getting to the moon.the Soviets Union followed theirs .
Slowly ,little be little . Every time the sent up a “satellite “
It was in realty a frozen cosmonaut .after they had 20 cosmonauts orbiting the earth they put the second part of there plan into effect.all the ship’s merged into one huge ship .And off it went Towards A distant planet only the soviets had found.
Little did the frozen cosmonauts know what lay ahead.
When the ship crashed landed on the planet of Zombies.
At first they feared for there lives.After all seeing 9ft tall half dead zombies walking around can scare the shit out of ya. Soon they were brought before the leaders.And
That’s when the began the tale of how and why the had
Arrived on the world.But what most intrigued the leaders
Was how Communism worked .And at that they marveled
The most .almost instantly they reworked the society to be a perfect model of Communism . The crew cooperated fully with the remolding of their society .And when it was done Cosmonauts sat back and smiled for it soo beautiful to them.But their happiness’ was short lived .
The leaders hungered for for more,More than the could have ever dreamed of in their worst nightmares. They wanted to know about Earth and its billon’s of inhabitants .That’s when they hatched there invasion plan.

The cast of characters .

“ MORGANZA” 7’ 7” of Nordic Knockdown. Huge brute of a man .Think , Doc savage meets Thor.Use a 900lb ship anchor chain as weapon.

“Lost- Sparten” mysterious man from what used to be
Canada.Fly around in a cross between a Apache copter and a tank.

“ BRUCE LEE” master of Jeet -kon -do .two robotic forearms. Think karnak meets the Cybog guy from teen-titians(comic book) uses Nanotec nun- chucks. 100.000 volts shots though them.And it turns on and off evertime the touch his hands or body.
“MECH -ANGLE” Transformer type with huge wings.
She slash the CZ with these .She gives them Salvation ,Right too HELL.

“ MR-HADES” He’s got that grin ,That says TIME TO DIE!. Has A army of small and larger robots that do his biding. Fav saying “ SMEG” wears a modified out back duster.lot’s of internal pockets.

“ FLAVOR + KD”
F LAVOR’s the MARINE .Born again Hard.Drives a 6ton
Hardened Military wrecker .With twin 20mil cannons on the roof.
“KD” is FLAVORS nephew. Street tuff Crazy ass good driver. Think the TRANSPORTER meets Fast a Furious.
Armour plated tuner with ground effects and twin 30 cal s Also lays mines.

[lost-spartan]

“Lost- Sparten” mysterious man from what used to be
Canada.Fly around in a cross between a Apache copter and a tank.

Coolio. I've already got an idea for a tank-copter hybrid design in mind. This is gonna be fun >D

[Tecknic]

I can not begin to explain how awesome I think this concept is.

[Wo-Nellie]

Obvuuily (sic) this wont be somthing I'm selling.just for fun.

When you become famous brokenhill "then" you can sell it for lots more money! ;)



...you've got the start a cool community project... And I'm sure a lot more PJ'rs would love to contribute and get in on the fun as well. ;)

I can offer terrible suggestions! :confused:

[Morganza]

Wow never thought you guys would be soo Cool with this.
Excelent.Well I have a number of sketchs for the diffrent charters and the bad guys ect. that i will post and I have a script for one whole story written up.I'd love to get as many guys and gals envoled that what too.For instance I was going to pm Morgan his charcter 2 page script.
I've got to get my dauther to type up the whloe story though.
Then ill post that with the sketchs and will go from there.
Thanks again .Ill get my ass to work.
Is that going to ok in this theard or shoud it be moved ?

Sweet, I'm waiting for your PM!

[brokenhill]

Sorry i took so long its been crazy busy here 4 of my kids started school this week.

Anyhow here are my VERY ,VERY rough Ideas Rough skecths and
of coruse the story for the 1 st issue.
this are the thumb nails for Morgan.
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/P7.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/P8.jpg

thses are the ones for lost -spartan
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/P4.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/P5.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/P6.jpg


here are my sketch's If you want to change somthing just let know,But i cant buge on my son Max idea of a flying spider walker
(he came up with it).

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/Ideas1.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/LostSpartan.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/ideas2.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/ideas3.jpg

and the story and remember I've never done this so the pacing mit be a little wonky.

1. Long bird’s eye view of “BH” walled woodland compound.

2. BH walking towards house

3. Just sitting down for breakfast (table shot)

4. Close up of alarm going off.

5. (words) Flavor + KD need help being over run while trying to rescue 20 civilians in New York.

6. BH looks at son “Max” (time to go to work”

6a. cut too a 3/4 shot of Lost-spartan tankcopter taken off from a snow coverd lauch pad in what was once Canada

7. Cut to BH + Max getting into battle vehicles.

8. Max flies off but BH can’t get his flyer started (flying spider)

9. Close up of face (calling mech-angel, need assistance)

10. BH climb into his 4x4 battle Javelin

11. Mech-angel fly overhead.

11a. cut to a closeup of a vidioe mon. showing LS arriving to battle CZ in old newyork.

12. Swoop down and grabs 4x4

13. Shot of both of them flying off mech carrying the 4x4
P. 4

14. Long shot Flavor + KD + 20 civilians surrounded by one hundred commie zombies.

15 Up shot of Lost Spartan flying to the rescue.

16 + 17. Battle

P .5

18. Max arrives (In flying battle spider)

19. Shot of mech-angel flying carrying 4x4x Javelin.

20. Dropping off 4x4 to ground

21, 22, 23 +24. Fight

P .6

25. Long shot of hundreds of dead commie zombies and the heroes.

26. (Radio call for help) (Bruce Lee + Mr. Hades)
P.7

27. Close up of log shattering into four chunks.

28. Face shot of “Morganza” sweating.

29. Pull back view of him throwing another log at a snow plow blade.

30. Suddenly, a noise a behind him catches his attention (turns head)

31. 2 or 3 commie zombies come at him from the cover of the woods.

P .8

32. Having no weapon in hand he just punch it the helmet shattering it.

33. That doesn’t stop it and the others advance on him.

34. Above the battle floats a “zombamatrix” guiding her zombie soldiers.

35 + 36. Fight

37. Throws one of plow blades + grabs big chain and starts smashing them.

38. Get's call from BL + Mr. H

P .9

39. Close up on BL + Mr. H

40. Pull back shot sowing them covertly observing a huge CZ base (looking down)

41. Mr. H is watching a small view screen. He has one of his bots in the camp. (The bot is a camouflage to look like a dirt clog)

42. BL says to Mr. H, “We gotta find out why the zombies have started to capture people and bring them here.

P .10

43. As the bot moves throughout the camp past a holding pen with hundreds of humans locked inside.

44. (Looks through the bot eyes) Large group being lead out of the pen towards a large machine.

45. The bot follows.

46. Close up of BL + Mr. H Faces, the look of horror on them after seeing the images sent back.

THE END ?

I will be doing the frist 3 pages and the last one s if nobody else want's in .What I think we also need is sombody to do word ballons and dialoge Anybody.also I'm open for other ideas and action.Thanks again morgan and todd and Simone and anybody else willing to help.

remember only You can Help KILL Commie Zombies from Outer Space.

[Morganza]

BRILLIANT!

I will work on the Morganza Pages, I will make one minor change to how I split logs though. This is going to be fun!

[Morganza]

Some Sketches - CZFOS MORGANZA (http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3995/090708kp4.gif)

[Ugga Bugga]

funny stuff.

[brokenhill]

BRILLIANT!

I will work on the Morganza Pages, I will make one minor change to how I split logs though. This is going to be fun!

thats great I bow to your skill .
also disreguard my LS copter as lostspartan Had A hell of a better desigin.Nice work
I have updated the script a tad and asked Mr. hades if he would do P.6.
Anybody else want in .come'on were making history here.

[acosby]

I'm gonna be out of town for a while and won't be able to turn anything in until near the end of the month. If thats Ok I'd love to have a page. It would be pretty damn cool to be part of a book totally produced by Pjers.

[brokenhill]

I'm gonna be out of town for a while and won't be able to turn anything in until near the end of the month. If thats Ok I'd love to have a page. It would be pretty damn cool to be part of a book totally produced by Pjers.

sure take a page we'd love to have your work man.anything after morgans. Page 9 or 10 or I totally forgot about the prolouge.

here are some sketches of charcters rides .
The tank copter was Lost spartan own design.
I will post the Flavor wreaker and My 4x4 javelin .

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/Lostspartan25.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/Maxsspider.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/KD.jpg

[Ugga Bugga]

This project is kicking some major ass.

[Wo-Nellie]

Anybody else want in .come'on were making history here.

I would, but I'm actually not good for much. Can't draw, can't write, can't ink, can't color. :confused:
I can cheerlead though: Rah! Rah! Sis-Boom-Bah! Go Commie Zombies from Outerspace. Yay! :D

[Morganza]

Here is a layout of my first page~

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2882/090908ky2.gif

[acosby]

I'll take page 9. 10 has got a crowd scene and boy do I hate doing crowd scenes. Never been long on patience me.

[brokenhill]

I'll take page 9. 10 has got a crowd scene and boy do I hate doing crowd scenes. Never been long on patience me.

that sounds great ,page 9 it is .Wo-Nellie can we get a cheer for that.
Morgan that looking %$%^#*^!%&)* sweet.

Can I get a mod to move this too community projects.
Thanks.

[lost-spartan]

A quick and probably the only preveiw of the pages Simone and I are doing until he finishes them. I can't wait to see what he does with them. ;)

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c113/lost-spartan/CZpreview.jpg

[brokenhill]

Looking @#^&%*& nice as well Lost -spartan.

[brokenhill]

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/Flavor.jpg

http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/brokenhill-1.jpg

[Spidey]

Haha, I think the most successful community projects are the least planned ones. Looking forward to seeing more.

[Ugga Bugga]

agreed.................

[brokenhill]

Here are my very rough pg1+2 haveing memorey issiue with the puter.I still have aways to go .
hope the action is'nt too disappionting.


PG 1
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/Pg1.jpg


PG 2
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/PG2.jpg

[Morganza]

I'm impressed dude, this is becoming badass!

[brokenhill]

I'm impressed dude, this is becoming badass!

thanks Morg.with you and lost spartan and Caimano
doing the heavy lifting, we cant go wrong and Acosby ageed to do pg 9.And now we've got Mr. Hades volntering to do the pg.6 splash art with the piles of dead Commie Zombies.
Anybody else want in.really could use someone to do lettring,A very creative person almost God like.

I'm starting the prolouge.as i finish my other pages.
Stay tuned ..

[Caimano]

Ah, it reminds me the action '80 movies + some Rodriguez feeling;) You know tough guy, big cars, big guns...

UPDATE: I received Todd board 1 (it rocks) and I'm inking it. I'm almost done with it, but I have my dad to hospital and tomorrow he's going to have a surgery operation so I'm going to finish it when I have a bit of spare time

[brokenhill]

Ah, it reminds me the action '80 movies + some Rodriguez feeling;) You know tough guy, big cars, big guns...

UPDATE: I received Todd board 1 (it rocks) and I'm inking it. I'm almost done with it, but I have my dad to hospital and tomorrow he's going to have a surgery operation so I'm going to finish it when I have a bit of spare time

hope all goes well.

[Caimano]

hope all goes well.

Thanks pal! Everything went well!

I got back to home from hospital at dinner time and after a quick dinner I worked hard on the Commie page and finished the Todd page ink . I already sent the page to Todd and I really hope he (and you) like it.

[airbrushartist]

Ok some of you guys had the idea that I shoud maybe do a
comic about COMMIE ZOMBIES from outerspace invading my woodland compound.
It was in the "faces behind the names" therad.
Well heres the start .I'm going to try and do at least one issue.
Now if anybody listed as guest stars does not what anthing to do with this let me know.Other wise I'll take that as you dont mind me using your names.I got a number of things draw up so ....
C&C and thanks for looking and if anybody else what to be drawn in let me know.
Obvuuily this wont be somthing I'm selling.just for fun.
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/COMICcover.jpg

Awww c'mon Brokenhill at least a little acknowledgment of who came up with the name.;) :D

[lost-spartan]

The first of two pages myself and Simone are doing.

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c113/lost-spartan/CZp2inked.jpg

[Mr.Hades]

I've yet to start on page six...crazy busy at work, but will get the time next week!

[brokenhill]

The first of two pages myself and Simone are doing.

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c113/lost-spartan/CZp2inked.jpg


TODD and Simone ,Your first page is EXTRAORDINARY.
Both of you guys alone or as a team are magnificent ARTST"S.
love the Candian LS compound


and ya ,airbrushartist and E-T-i came up with the name.
Now I got to share my billons$$$$ with you guys cause I just sold this to Speilberg. now what is 2billon split 8 ways.
if you forget the money I'll put u both in issue two.?

[airbrushartist]

Just kidding Bro. I just find it funny that I may be the cause of two creative properties, if only in a very small way. Hyuck

[KrisDiaz]

wow this is coming along...cool shit...feel honored to be apart of.....hey brokenhill if you got a page you want me to draw send me a script or roughs and i'll see what i can do....anywho keep on working on it ,its cool to see someone actually work on and complete an idea

[covie]

Am I too late to volunteer some inking or colouring?

[e_t_i]

and ya ,airbrushartist and E-T-i came up with the name.
Now I got to share my billons$$$$ with you guys cause I just sold this to Speilberg. now what is 2billon split 8 ways.
if you forget the money I'll put u both in issue two.?

Hmmm...financial security at last, or a cameo in a comic book... decisions, decisions :D

Thanks, I'd be honored!

[brokenhill]

wow this is coming along...cool shit...feel honored to be apart of.....hey brokenhill if you got a page you want me to draw send me a script or roughs and i'll see what i can do....anywho keep on working on it ,its cool to see someone actually work on and complete an idea sure you can help,if you check this prolouge out.
if you can make this into one page or two if your up for it.


It was 1969 and while the US pursued the dream of getting to the moon.the Soviets Union followed theirs .
Slowly ,little be little . Every time the sent up a “satellite “
It was in realty a frozen cosmonaut .after they had 20 cosmonauts orbiting the earth they put the second part of there plan into effect.all the ship’s merged into one huge ship .And off it went Towards A distant planet only the soviets had found.
Little did the frozen cosmonauts know what lay ahead.
When the ship crashed landed on the planet of Zombies.
At first they feared for there lives.After all seeing 9ft tall half dead zombies walking around can scare the shit out of ya. Soon they were brought before the leaders.And
That’s when the began the tale of how and why the had
Arrived on the world.But what most intrigued the leaders
Was how Communism worked .And at that they marveled
The most .almost instantly they reworked the society to be a perfect model of Communism . The crew cooperated fully with the remolding of their society .And when it was done Cosmonauts sat back and smiled for it soo beautiful to them.But their happiness’ was short lived .
The leaders hungered for for more,More than the could have ever dreamed of in their worst nightmares. They wanted to know about Earth and its billon’s of inhabitants .That’s when they hatched there invasion plan.
all the other notes are in the begining of the theard





Am I too late to volunteer some inking or colouring? sure you can still help. if you look at my two pages ,if I finsh the plain line work,could you ink thoses up.Then i can start page 10. or if you want instead you could color the finished cover .

guys let me know.

Still need somebody too do the words /lettering .Generaly making everbody say cool S%$T, and deying Zombie nosies

[NewYorkPicasso]

Jesus Christ, where the **** have I been?? This is the most awesome thing anybody has come up with since I been a member of Penciljack. Let me know how I can contribute.

I am flying down to Florida tomorrow to see my Nephew Kris so while I am there, me and him can throw down on something together, just tell us what to do. I will be down there from the 20th until the 23rd so we will have to work fast.

The page by Spartan and Simone is gorgeous, The two styles are perfect together.

FRP

[Caimano]

The page by Spartan and Simone is gorgeous, The two styles are perfect together.

FRP

Thanks pal, too kind. I always wanted to try to be an inker, but I always inked my stuff, so i asked Todd and he kindly accepted the cllaboration for a pin up he drew (Agent Graves) and for these two Commie pages.

[brokenhill]

[QUOTE=flavaricanprince;943541]Jesus Christ, where the **** have I been?? This is the most awesome thing anybody has come up with since I been a member of Penciljack. Let me know how I can contribute.

I am flying down to Florida tomorrow to see my Nephew Kris so while I am there, me and him can throw down on something together, just tell us what to do. I will be down there from the 20th until the 23rd so we will have to work fast.

You guys can do the prolouge 1or two pages ,the scrpt is on here ,just go wild guys.

Well here is the finshed cover .


http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/CZFOSCOVERfinal.jpg

[Caimano]

Dig the cover!!!

Any colourist on board yet?

[covie]

Awesome. Do you have a hi-res of the cover for the colour, say 400dpi, that you can email me? Also, I'll take a stab at inking some pages. Again, need a hi-res for those pages as well...

[brokenhill]

Awesome. Do you have a hi-res of the cover for the colour, say 400dpi, that you can email me? Also, I'll take a stab at inking some pages. Again, need a hi-res for those pages as well...

sent ya a PM.

[acosby]

Hey Guys,

I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to back out of this project. I'd promised to do page 9, but I'm just not going to be able to. My life has just gone for a major shit and I'm just not going to be able to get to it.
I really wanted to sorry.

[brokenhill]

Hey Guys,

I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to back out of this project. I'd promised to do page 9, but I'm just not going to be able to. My life has just gone for a major shit and I'm just not going to be able to get to it.
I really wanted to sorry.

hope thing's start to turn up better for ya man.
Thanks for letting me know.

[brokenhill]

Anybody else got time to and the skill to letter this here "THANG".????

Rember ,The brain you save mite be your own!

[Morganza]

I'll letter it if nobody steps up, I'm not good at it but it will get done!

[Morganza]

Finished my first page.

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/6590/czfos01rb8.gif

[brokenhill]

Man ,your a GENIUS with a pencil and INK.

[lost-spartan]

The page is a beauty Morg!

[Mr.Hades]

Sweet page dude.

Got the whole day off on Monday to wait for an engineer to turn up. Should have mine up by the evening :)

[Morganza]

I did a mock up of the cover, I put it in comic dimensions, so theres alot of empty space near the top, but that could be filled in with space ships or clouds.

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2602/mockcovereg8.jpg

[brokenhill]

Man that look pretty COOL, Morg ,I love the scrpit on the bottom and the cast of charcter's best .Is that a font or did you make it up?makes it look like retro E.C. IS there anyway to work the side scrpit ( fantasy ) back in .
Cant wait to see how Covie colored the Org. cover.
if he has'nt done anything with it yet maybe we could roll with it.the only ther thing is if you could put Bruce -lee back on.Loston wallace just does'nt sound as scarey as Bruce Lee.
Sorry Loston, Great mockup .

[KrisDiaz]

me and my uncle got to do a really rough pencil page...i'll see if i can get it donesoon...and i'll just leave it as pencils

[brokenhill]

me and my uncle got to do a really rough pencil page...i'll see if i can get it donesoon...and i'll just leave it as pencils

hey that sounds great ,glad to have you guys doing your kickass art.

[Mr.Hades]

Here is what I have for Page six so far... Have just begun inking it
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c385/mrhades652/Bh-Page-1.jpg

Gotta draw in all the Zombies!!

[Victor-17]

I couldnt resist - love the concept. I've kind of been on a retro kick recently. This could really blow up into something big.

Kudos Broken hill.
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l312/Victor-17/COMMIEZOMBIES.jpg

[brokenhill]

Mr . Hades your's is looking great man and Victor that looks sweet as well..

every man, woman and child should join arms ,to fight

COMMIE ZOMBIE FROM OUTER SPACE!!

[Caimano]

Gotta draw in all the Zombies!!


Good work man! i can't wait for seeing it fineshed with all the zombies inside!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Caimano]

I couldnt resist - love the concept. I've kind of been on a retro kick recently. This could really blow up into something big.

Kudos Broken hill.


This is could be also a very good T-Shirt image!!!!!!!

[KrisDiaz]

heres what i got done so far...this is from the prologue you posted it...i took each sentence and pretty much turned it into a panel..at this rate it'll probly be about 2-3 pages total....im gonna be busy for about the next week or two so i wont have the time to work on the next pages, if you can wait i can get to it.....


http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/KrisDiaz23/Untitled-1copy-4.jpg

[Morganza]

Outstanding work Kris!

[Mr.Hades]

Wow, that page totally blew me away. Great work dude

[Morganza]

Here's a new logo with Victor 17's influence.

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/8041/logo3eg3.gif

[brokenhill]

heres what i got done so far...this is from the prologue you posted it...i took each sentence and pretty much turned it into a panel..at this rate it'll probly be about 2-3 pages total....im gonna be busy for about the next week or two so i wont have the time to work on the next pages, if you can wait i can get to it.....


http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/KrisDiaz23/Untitled-1copy-4.jpg

That looks F*&king great you and your Uncle kicked ass.
And I can wait if your still up to do more, very nice.

[KrisDiaz]

ya i would definatly like to finish da prologue...i got it all planned out as far as layout

[brokenhill]

well ya prob. thought this was dead,Not. here are the very rough art for the last 4 pages.
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/1lastpages15.jpg
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/2lastpages15.jpg
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/3lastpages15.jpg

[brokenhill]

and last page
http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll194/brokenhhill/4lastpages15.jpg

[Jel]

I did a mock up of the cover, I put it in comic dimensions, so theres alot of empty space near the top, but that could be filled in with space ships or clouds.

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2602/mockcovereg8.jpg

This is really sweet! But shouldn't it read BROKEN HILL'S instead of BROKEN HILLS' ?

Just discovered about it, great project guys!

[mana-boozy]

damn all of these look sweet!

and the original source material is f'n sweet as well!

i always prefered stuff like these!

great work folks!

wish i could have contributed!

[brokenhill]

man if ya want in ,let me know.
I hope it an't DEAD .

[Ugga Bugga]

I never realized this was so far along. Nice work everyone. Let's see this finish up.

[Ugga Bugga]

Finished my first page.

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/6590/czfos01rb8.gif

That is simply fantastic.

[brokenhill]

Morg does Rock!! I need to stop being lazy and get too work.
Thanks for the nuge UGGA.You da Man.

[mana-boozy]

yeah morg rock's da house!

let me know if u need a hand brokenhill! i'll c what i can do to help.

[Ugga Bugga]

If I can put in my two cents here. it looks like this is a fun project, thought ought to be completed.

I am not throwing my hat in the ring to get this done though. I have too much on my plate, and would only run roughshod over this thing.

My advice

1. Assign an Editor to organize things, and keep production moving
2. On a page by page basis, figure out what has been completed, and create a master list
3. figure out what needs to be done, and start assigning people to finish the pages off. give strict deadlines
4. Make us proud.

[brokenhill]

If I can put in my two cents here. it looks like this is a fun project, thought ought to be completed.

I am not throwing my hat in the ring to get this done though. I have too much on my plate, and would only run roughshod over this thing.

My advice

1. Assign an Editor to organize things, and keep production moving
2. On a page by page basis, figure out what has been completed, and create a master list
3. figure out what needs to be done, and start assigning people to finish the pages off. give strict deadlines
4. Make us proud.

That sound's great,anybody up to the job .I have notes for a whole second issu.
And thanks mana-boozey I will take you up on that offer.

[KrisDiaz]

is this project still alive and kicking or what?

[brokenhill]

is this project still alive and kicking or what?

well great ta have ya back man,I think it all kind of did fall apart,My fault all the way.I'm not much of a leader ,I have the last four pages done but not inked.hell i even started a cover for a number 2.
I cant tell ya how much the pages ya did for the prolouge rocked and if your back on the rest I Will kick my self in the ASS and get going . to at lest finish.

[KrisDiaz]

might as well i dont have much else to do and ive gotten rusty with sequentials since i got locked up.....

[brokenhill]

cool shit man ,I 'm kicking my ass back into gear.

[KrisDiaz]

prologue page 2...kinda sloppy but im just tryin to add fuel to this fire and get it burning again.......hopefully
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/KrisDiaz23/czfospro-12.jpg

[brokenhill]

VERY SWEET Man,exceptional work Kris

[Ugga Bugga]

Steve, if you can decipher for me what has been done, and what remains to be done, I can help organize this into a format that progress can be tracked.

Not interested in EIC-ing this, but I can help a potential EIC get it in shape, so that it can be managed properly.

Let me know.

[brokenhill]

Steve, if you can decipher for me what has been done, and what remains to be done, I can help organize this into a format that progress can be tracked.

Not interested in EIC-ing this, but I can help a potential EIC get it in shape, so that it can be managed properly.

Let me know.

Thanks Man ,i will see what can put toghter.And Anybody still
interested in being involed in this let me know.Tood finishshed his 2 pages and kris is working on his.I kind of forgot how all was in on this as well.

[lost-spartan]

That reminds Steve, shoot Simo a pm and see if he inked that 2nd page of ours yet.

[KrisDiaz]

heres what i got for prologue page 3 so far.....gotta finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee46/KrisDiaz23/CZFOS3.jpg

[C William Russette]

I for one would really like to see this finished. There is too much mad energy going on this tale.

[KrisDiaz]

i agree with ya .....this is a project i thought would have been finished by the time i got back only to find it had run out of steam shortly after i did

[brokenhill]

i agree with ya .....this is a project i thought would have been finished by the time i got back only to find it had run out of steam shortly after i did

I'M Sorry.





.

[KrisDiaz]

dont be sorry .......you were able to take somebodys comment (i think it was about the brokenhill compound if i wasnt mistaken) and turn it into arather funny but really cool old school zombie comic.......most peoples ideas stay that and never make it onto paper

[brokenhill]

dont be sorry .......you were able to take somebodys comment (i think it was about the brokenhill compound if i wasnt mistaken) and turn it into arather funny but really cool old school zombie comic.......most peoples ideas stay that and never make it onto paper

Man Thanks But i just droped the ball,You guys were bringing F
great art and ideas.Hell i love seeing your take on it Kris.
prob is I'm not a leader.
But for what its worth I really thank
everbody that contributied and that took a look and had positive stuff to say.

[Morganza]

It Liiiiives!

[KrisDiaz]

bring it back bring it back!

[VicM]

Do it!!!!!

[CM_Cooza]

Come on fellas. This is too good to let slip through the cracks!

[fatmancomics]

Who has been assigned pages and who is finished with them? Does this project have inkers, colorists and letterers?

[KrisDiaz]

i dk, i did do 3 pages, not sure if they were all scanned up, i can knock out low-mid quality pages for this, if someone will ink them

[fatmancomics]

Alright, let me get a hold of brokenhill and we'll see if we can at least get this first issue finished. If he gives the go ahead, I'll try and do some recruiting for inkers, colorists and letterers for what's done.

[fatmancomics]

Alright, brokenhill gave me the go ahead to take charge of this. Everyone who has done pages so far cool with turning them in by the end of January?

It would also help speed things up if you could ink and color your own work. If you can't, that's cool but I'd like to get everyone to finish their pages as much as possible. Until all the characters meet, it's like an anthology so I don't think that varying inks and colors will look that bad.

[golgotha]

how can i do a page? i like zombies.

[Ugga Bugga]

thrilled to see this gather steam. It is such a fun project.

[Popninja]

It does seem like a fun project. What happened during the 8-month gap in postings?

[Ugga Bugga]

about as much as what happened in PJU :)

[brokenhill]

It does seem like a fun project. What happened during the 8-month gap in postings?

Nothing.i didnt finish the last pages,and didnt write anymore.
if ya want more detail I'll PM ya.

[fatmancomics]

Okay, just to update everyone: I had planned on taking this project and combining it with the sequential league since Nickguy backed out of that project at the last minute.
Nickguy had originally planned on using the sequential league as a way to finish member projects like the PJU and, since this one is unfinished and people showed an interest, I figured I would post scripts for the remaining pages and try to get them done through a competition.
What I was thinking was that I post three pages at once and we vote on the entries. Winning entry gets used in the finished project.
However, it seems like interest is picking up again in here so I don't know if BH just wants to go back to being in charge of this. Let me know please.

[fatmancomics]

how can i do a page? i like zombies.

We still have the last part of the prologue which should be good for 1 to 3 pages. Wanna color someone else's work too?

[Morganza]

Heres the page I did http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/189/czfos01.jpg

[brokenhill]

However, it seems like interest is picking up again in here so I don't know if BH just wants to go back to being in charge of this. Let me know please.

No Man,this your baby to run .i might finish the second cover though. Glad to see interst .

[Victor-17]

I'm game for some inks.

[VicM]

I'm down for pencilling and inking a page.

[golgotha]

so, is this going to have a sign up?

[fatmancomics]

I'm game for some inks.

How many pages are you willing to ink?


I'm down for pencilling and inking a page.

Just one?


so, is this going to have a sign up?

Yes, I will be making a sign up thread officially opening up the sequential league so that we will have a competition for February. I'm trying to make up my mind if I will do three pages a month or three pages every two weeks. As of now I'm thinking of leaving it up to the contestants how complete they want to make their entries but, if a set of pages that has only been pencilled wins, then we'll have to have a competition for the other parts like inking, coloring and lettering.

[Victor-17]

hopefully work will get back down to 50 hours a week, which should give me a chance to do a couple a month - depends on the pencils though. That, and I'm getting a Bamboo, which i am anxious to try out - if I can just get my CS2 and CorelX3 to work on my new Windows7 laptop.

this seems like an awesome project that can go so many directions. Let's get it on!

[fatmancomics]

Okay, well, as of now you are our official inker. I'll PM you to ask for more details. I'm locking this puppy down, anyone else that wants to participate will just have to sign up for the Sequential League. (http://penciljack.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1121091#post1121091)