View Full Version : spider man verses ....
08-23-2008, 03:55 PM
yeah i know the drawing is still big i cant get the right size. this is th beginig for the DO,any way constructive critism is wanted.
08-23-2008, 08:23 PM
if you've already seen it disreguard this but losten did a tutorial on the webbing http://www.penciljack.com/forum/showthread.php?t=82132
08-23-2008, 11:16 PM
I'm not sure what position you're trying for. If you are going for the classic "in swing pose" it feels very static. Not sure how to fix that.
Now, the head is out of proportion to the body. The torso you made is big and long. Now, you can make the head a little bigger (I can do a little overlay, but be warned, I'm not good at them).
Also his thighs are a bit thin. Think more watermelon like. And his rump should be fuller.
It looks like you drew the head and left arm and then tried to fill the rest in and that's where the proportion got away from you.
Hope that helps some. Also his right arm is off where the elbow meets the forearm.
Hope I wasn't too hard.
08-24-2008, 04:45 AM
i think you shouldn't start with all that detail but focus on the form/gesture itself. try to imagine the figure in 3d and keep in mind how the body works. it's always good to pose in front of the mirror befor you start to draw. but the details (like the mask) should be the last thing to add.
08-24-2008, 08:48 AM
I think Spidey is going to be swinging someone else by a line on this one ... but pay attention to what Arne did for a break down MEP ... there be gold in that there post ... keep it up
08-24-2008, 02:40 PM
spidey is standing on a building and and swinging wolverine in sort of like spidey 976 said.
oh and thank you arnes that will still work for what i am still doing.
08-24-2008, 05:06 PM
... any way constructive critism is wanted.
spider man verses
I think you may have meant versus unless I'm just not seeing the Spider-man poetry. ;)
08-24-2008, 05:13 PM
He and Wolverine are having a poetry contest.
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