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DogSoldier
04-24-2008, 04:05 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/3448/ironcapwol2sy4.jpg

rdarkstream
04-24-2008, 04:57 PM
i like wolverine.
Can you remove the blue line?

MEPsketcher
04-24-2008, 05:29 PM
pretty awesome drawings
i noiticed that most of your heads are the same shape

charkxl
04-24-2008, 06:03 PM
once again buddy, great work.
I've noticed that your rendering is pretty top notch although you still have some anatomy issues you need working out.
Wolverine's left arm is twisted in a totally weird way, I've found that if sometimes I'm trying to work ur a pose, it helps to get into the pose myself, in front of a mirror and work out my centre lines and which way my body turns before I commit to finish pencils.
I know that sometimes it can be hard to see mistakes when you've been staring at a page for more than a few hours, but it also helps to look at your image in the mirror also, to see it from a different perspective.
Anyway, love the work, keep 'em coming! :D

DogSoldier
04-24-2008, 06:43 PM
Thanks alot for the comments .

Ya that arm looks alittle weird charkxl , i agree , I think it's the forearm and muscle direction .
Also , i found out I really HATE drawing Ironman after this pic .

charkxl
04-24-2008, 06:48 PM
Also , i found out I really HATE drawing Ironman after this pic .

I know what you mean. I've always wanted to do a proper Ironman pin-up but he is a bit of a b**** to draw.

DogSoldier
04-24-2008, 07:15 PM
This Ironman here i just went noodle crazy on , not planning anything out at all , it was much more fun .

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/628/ironman800fh1.jpg

SilverSkies
04-25-2008, 12:34 AM
This is great pic.........

SilverSkies
04-25-2008, 12:42 AM
i just clean and if you like it..

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/1484/ironcapwol2sy4eu1.jpg

underwearhero
04-25-2008, 02:39 AM
nice job! I see improvement. Just some anatomical issues that might need fixing. The legs muscles mostly. But good rendering and nice faces.

DogSoldier
04-25-2008, 06:26 AM
Thanks for fixing that Silverskies .

Underwearhero , i agree the legs got rushed abit .

hydekomiksink
04-26-2008, 01:11 AM
I agree with the blue out it is easier to see. I really like the rendering -beautiful. 2 cents= wolverine's hands really kinda glare at me his left fingers are alittle off and left wrist a little thick I think. His right hand is in a wierd straight pose and a little big too.

rdarkstream
04-26-2008, 01:30 PM
i like the pencil(clean) version a lot.
Ironman looks to thin.
Captain i also needs to be a tad longer maybe?
Wolvie is the best

spidey976
04-26-2008, 01:38 PM
Well done m8.

Gotta say that the bluelines are a little distracting. However, with that being said great job ... and great rendering as always. In general though IronMan is a little skinny ... his armour should have more weight ... but I have to agree I HATE drawing him sometimes. Going to have to ge by that ... my son loves old shell head.

acosby
04-27-2008, 02:23 PM
I find Ironman's hips a touch Femmy. Or maybe he just looks like one of those olympic speed walkers with the super fast hips.

AlphaMale73
04-28-2008, 06:18 PM
nicely done indeed.

ssjtom
04-28-2008, 06:40 PM
that 2nd iron man picture you drew was absolutely pimp.
I really liked the pose.

DogSoldier
04-28-2008, 08:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comments .

I seen that the first Ironman was looking alittle girlish around the hips , think it's those circle things on them and the way i did the legs .

Got another pic in the works at the moment , anatomy will be better with it , just about done + should have it up tommorow if GTA 4 does'nt slow me down .

Studi0205@yahoo.com
04-28-2008, 08:15 PM
I really like this. I especially like the amount of detail you added to each character, example Captain America's scaled top. If I had anything to say on changes. I would say to tone down the smoke steak behind Iron Man. It kind of looks too solid thus merging into his form, as if he's grabbing onto it with his left hand. Great stuff, especially the other post, with Venom! The pose was awesome

slayerfan66666
05-07-2008, 11:45 AM
nice. i wonder why no one ever does a different take on the look of cap or wolvie?