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returncamelot
04-21-2008, 06:45 AM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/sweattshop/img132.jpg
larq2525
04-21-2008, 01:58 PM
That's a pretty cool pose with a nice slight upshot. Good anatomy, too, but what's he doing with that left hand? Looks like he's about to spank himself. :p
returncamelot
04-21-2008, 02:00 PM
That's a pretty cool pose with a nice slight upshot. Good anatomy, too, but what's he doing with that left hand? Looks like he's about to spank himself. :p

Ya I think I will put more bend in the elbow to move his hand up higher.
Thanks Larq.
hydekomiksink
04-22-2008, 01:54 AM
Great pose - very dynamic over the shoulder. I think his head land neck look a little big, but I really dig his natural looking stance.
returncamelot
04-22-2008, 04:08 AM
Great pose - very dynamic over the shoulder. I think his head land neck look a little big, but I really dig his natural looking stance.

Ya, the head is a little big after a second look.
I thought it was the hand at first.

I'm going to refine this and get crits and then ink away.

Thansk hydekomiksink
Doppelganger
04-22-2008, 05:39 AM
There's a real dynamism to the pose - I think when you add in the fingers on that back hand it'll be more obvious it's further back in the field than his butt and all will be well...


nice one....
smygba
04-22-2008, 06:04 AM
I like the shot, but the guy has a big head for my tastes. Proportional size is a personal preference though. You need to angle and foreshorten the left hand better, or draw some fingers in. Personally I don't think its a dynamic pose, but more a moody shot. Some good rendering could set it off.
Bruce Lee
04-22-2008, 06:27 AM
His head seems a little large in proportion to his body. Try reducing it down about 10 % and the figure will look more in proportion, and a little more heroic to boot.

His right arm seems a little on the stubby side. You should perhaps lengthen the areas of his shoulder, his tricep/bicep, and his forearm a little more. A minor size reduction (5% or so) of his right hand might also help matters.

Other than the proportions, it's looking good. :)

Loston
AlphaMale73
04-25-2008, 07:46 PM
Is this referenced? looks very dynamic.