My Table Scraps: Enojoi

[Atlas]

I'll start with everything I have on the Internet at the moment...

These pictures were for a Photography Project at College...

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/FrancisCasavant1.jpg

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/FrancisMerged1.jpg

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/MrsBandFrancis.jpg

[spidey976]

Hey there Atlas ... welcome to PJ

Firstly these are really interesting first posts ... but a little hard to give C&C (comments & critiques) about because we really don't know a lot about you (age, how long you have been drawing, etc...). The one thing I will say is to study the construction of the human face a bit. Your eye placement is a bit off. I will say I like your clean lines.

Keep up the posts ... and welcome again.

Shawn

[Atlas]

Ok well, it'd be best if wrote about myself here then...I'm 17 from England, I've drawn since [can't remember] but have only gone from amaturish to trying harder for a more professional look...this is where I found this site...and am looking to improve my illustrations.

Here's a new one I did today...I've started to write letters as you can see :) personalised it a bit

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/Harley.jpg

[spidey976]

Well Atlas ... you are in the right place if you want to improve ... I know I have learned an aweful lot. Just have a thick skin ... and take what you can from the comments and critiques that you get from everyone around here ... as there is a hell of a lot of talent.

As for you lass on the letter ... definetly a Batman the Animated Series look to her ... is it Barbara Gordon .... if it is you might want to sight your reference as people some times get a little off if you don't. Nicely done ... though ... psst ... she is missing an arm ... lol.

Keep posting.

Shawn

[Atlas]

Thanks again man! [Theres too much talent...:eek: ]...But I saw your blogg and it has shown to stick with this website...your newer pictures are really good now...

Yeah actually I'm not really sure who it is...though it looks more like Harley when she's sane...

Here's the reference...http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/1931.jpg

[Atlas]

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/01FirstPageNayan.jpg

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/XRAY1.jpg

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/MrsB.jpg

[Atlas]

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/Image0001-1.jpg

first sketch page in here :D

[Atlas]

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/profiles.jpg

crappy profiles

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/sins.jpg

[Atlas]

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/Image0001-3.jpg

Haven't done too much stuff in a while quick sketch...

[spidey976]

Hmmm ... some interesting stuff here .. I can see some improvement in placement of structure ... and some interesting style choices.

Good stuff

Shawn

P.S. thanks for the comments about my blog ... I just keep working at it.

[Atlas]

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc91/Nyn_04/Image0004.jpg

new things...