true_illusion
05-10-2007, 07:11 AM
Yes i write for fun, i know i need to get a life...
PAGE ONE
Splash page : Its nighttime, a small light blue compact car is seen with headlights glaring pulling up to an archway that reads “Camp Crystal Lake”. The words Crystal lake have been scratched off and the word Blood written over top of it with paint. The car is in partial view as it is coming through the woods. It is raining, and there is lightning seen over the treetops in the background.
Caption : Some people believe with the right angles, they can possess anything they wish…
Caption : Some people believe nothing is beyond control...
Caption : Some people believe they are never wrong…
PAGE TWO (4 panels)
Panel 1 : The blue car has now made its way to the cabin that serves as the main office for the once great campsite. Headlights of the vehicle are still on. The driver side door is open. Inside the vehicle is a man and a woman, early thirties in age. They are looking at each other. The man is wearing a button up shirt and blue jeans while the woman is wearing a sundress with a flower imprint on it.
Tom : You got the keys baby?
Sue : You think I could forget something like that on a night like tonight?
Panel 2 : The lower half of the car is seen from this shot the driver side door is still open and now Tom’s feet hang out of the car touching the muddy ground below him. There is a small splash from the puddle his feet have landed in.
Tom : Well then lets get this party started.
Sue : (off panel) Do you really think he will come?
Tom : He’ll be here soon enough baby. It may just be the two of us baby, but he won’t be able to resist a chance to kill again, I ust hope I can find that paper before he gets here…
Panel 3 : Tom is standing in the rain staring at the main office cabin. Sue is still sitting in the car looking and is now leaning out of the driver side window
Sue : Thanks to Jason this place was a steal in price.
Tom : Yep baby, cheap as dirt, and just think, the reason this place is so cheap is the reason we are here…
Panel 4 : Tom is making his way up the old wooden stairs that lead to the main office. His clothes are now completely soaked. He is whistling.
PAGE THREE (3 Panels)
Panel 1 : A view from inside the main office Cabin, the old wooden door is wide open. Tom stands in the doorway. He is reaching is with his arm feeling the side of the wall for the light switch.
Tom : Come out, Come out, where ever you are…
Panel 2 : A view of the middle of Crystal Lake. In the middle of the lake is a large stone statue of a gargoyle.
Caption : Elsewhere on the campsite…
Panel 3 : Lightning strikes the water near the statue.
Caption : Be careful what you wish for…
PAGE FOUR (2 panels)
Panel One : Large shot of Jason emerging from the water. The Gargoyle can be seen off in the distance behind him. He has one arm on the dock as if he were pulling himself up. His other hand holds an old machete that is showing many signs of rust. The tip of the machete is buried in the water/beach. Water is dripping from everything. The eye holes in the hockey mask are to dark to see anything. The moon is high above the far off treetops and has a slight red tint to it. It is clearly visible despite the rain.
Panel 2 : Close up on Jason’s eyes and water is dripping down his hockey mask. The eye holes are now glowing blood red.
Caption : You may just get it…
PAGE FIVE (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Sue is now standing in the doorway, everything is still dark as Tom is going through a old rusted file cabinet with a flashlight flipping through various old looking papers in folders. Sue’s dress is soaked now become fairly see thru.
Caption : Camp Crystal Lake Main Office…
Sue : Did you find it yet Tom?
Tom : No I am still looking.
Panel 2 : Tom holds tightly in both hands a piece of paper, staring at with his eyes open as widely as possible. Across his face is a evil looking grin.
Tom : here it is, to activate the Amulet of Deception, aim the amulet at the desired target and recite the following…
Panel 3 : Tom’s attention is grabbed away from the paper as Sue walks past him brushing her index finger across his chin as she passes. She has a sultry look upon her face…
Tom : Hexus Manifect(stops due to Sue’s interruption)…
Sue : You know Tom all this stuff, the dark room, the storm outside, the excitement of all this control stuff is really…
Panel 4 : Tom has now grabbed Sue by both arms pulling her close to him, the paper is seen falling to the floor
Sue : Arousing…
Tom : Just think with this amulet we can deceive Jason, control him…
Panel 5 : Tom has now pushed sue up against the wall of the cabin with some force. Sue has a look of pleasure on her face, her eyes closed softly.
Tom : Make him do our bidding, make him take what we want…
Panel 6 : Tom and Sue are seen kissing . Sue’s hand can be seen undoing Tom’s jeans.
PAGE SIX (4 panels)
Panel 1 : Sue is ripping Tom’s button up shirt off, She is facing the door and Tom’s back is to the door, Sue is slightly crouching though so that the only thing in front of her that she can see is Tom. In the doorway stands Jason watching them, machete in hand.
Panel 2 : Tom is grabbing Sue by the hair pulling her up close to his face. The door cannot be seen in this panel.
Tom : All that we desire shall be ours…
Panel 3 : Tom with a fist full of hair is bending Sue over a nearby wooden desk. His other hand is starting to raise the bottom of Sue’s dress. The doorway is visible again but is empty as Jason no longer stands in it.
Panel 4 : Tom is pulling Sue’s head back by her hair, she has a look of pleasure on her face as you can tell he is penetrating her. Her head is pulled back with her ear close to his mouth.
Sue : mmm…
Tom : The world will be ours…
PAGE SEVEN (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Sue is laying on her back on the desk one leg bent with her foot o the table the other leg dangles off the edge of the desk. Tom is sitting in a old wooden chair off slightly to the left. Leaning back in the chair with it tilted backwards resting on a wall. Tom is smoking a cigarette.
Caption : 20 minutes later…
Tom : Sue, honey why don’t you run and grab the amulet out of the glove compartment…
Panel 2 : Sue is in the doorway on the cabin, Tom is still planted comfortably in the chair. Sue has her hand on the door jam and is looking back over her shoulder at Tom.
Sue : That was amazing lover…
Panel 3 : Sue is walking down the steps to the cabin. It is still raining, you can see the car to the left of the panel.
Panel 4 : Sue is bent into the passenger side seat of the car. You can see through the windshield that she is holding up the amulet.
Sue : There you are…
Panel 5 : Sue has now moved out of the window and is standing upright she is holding up the amulet and looking over her shoulder with a frightened look on her face. Jason stands behind her.
Sue : T….T…Tom (whispering)
Panel 6 : A low to ground view as you can see Jason’s feet firmly planted on the ground, Sue’s feet are close to the car, both of them dangling in the air.
SFX : Accckkk
PAGE EIGHT (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Tom is waking out of the cabin his head is down.
Caption : Ten minutes later…
Tom : Damn Woman whats taking so long, did you get lost or what…
Panel 2 : Tom is now looking at the car, and Sue is nowhere to be found.
Tom : Where the hell did the woman run off to.
Panel 3 Tom has made his way to the passenger side of the car. The amulet can be seen laying on the ground slightly covered in a mud puddle.
Panel 4 : Tom is kneeling down and picking the amulet up off the ground.
Tom : (yelling) ALRIGHT COME ON WOMAN, THIS AIN’T HE TIME FOR NO STUPID GAMES!
Panel 5 : Tom is leaning into the passenger side window to grab a flashlight out of the glove compartment. His other hand can be seen sliding the muddy amulet into the pocket of his jeans.
Tom : I swear I’m gonna ring that girl’s neck when I find her…
Panel 6 : Tom is walking off into the woods pointing the flashlight at the ground as he does so.
Tom : Damn wench has me running through these tick infested woods in the middle of the night and during a freaking thunderstorm to top it off…
PAGE NINE (5 panels)
Panel 1 : Tom is emerging from the woods near the dock to Crystal lake, there is an old boat docked there, looks like no one has maintained it for years. Tom is still shinning the flashlight at the ground. His pants are now covered knee high in mud.
Tom : Dammit Woman where are you?
Panel 2 : Tom is walking his way down the dock, shining the flashlight in front of him.
Tom : Maybe the first thing I will make Jason do is rid me of this little tramp…
Panel 3 : Tom is know at the end of the dock flashing the flashlight into the water and looking around.
Tom : I thought the little water rate of a girlfriend may have been down here, but I guess I was wrong…
Panel 4 : Tom turns around to start walking back up the dock but as he turns he bumps face first into Jason’s chest.
SFX : Ummph
Panel 5 : Tom falls to his butt trying to back pedal away from Jason. At the same time he has his hand in his pocket struggling to get the amulet of deception out. Jason is dragging Sue’s dead body behind him by her hair.
Tom : J…J…Jason…
PAGE TEN (5 panels)
Panel 1 : Close up of Jason’s Face, again the eye holes are dark and shadowed so you can’t see his eyes.
Panel 2 : Tom has dropped the amulet of the ground and his hand is blindly trying to find it as Tom refuses to take his eyes off Jason.
Panel 3 : Tom’s hand finally grabs the amulet as he is still scooting backward away from Jason. He is now looking over his shoulder realizing he is at the very edge of the dock.
Panel 4 : Tom now has the amulet pointed at Jason, he is shaking with fear and having trouble concentrating. Jason is still walking forward, still dragging Sue behind him
Tom : H..H..H..ex…Hex…
Panel 5 : Sue’s head is seen crashing down to the dock as Jason releases her.
SFX : THUD
PAGE ELEVEN (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Tom is trying to wipe the water pouring down his face from the rain away from his eyes still aiming the amulet at Jason. Still trying to recite the words to gain control over Jason.
Tom : Hex..xxxus…
Panel 2 : In this view you just see Tom’s outstretched hand, Jason’s hand now firmly wrapped around Tom’s wrist and his machete buried half way through Tom’s hand with blood oozing out of the would. Tom’s hand is now open and the amulet can be seen plummeting to the ground.
Panel 3 : The amulet is seen hitting the dock on edge. Making a small splash in the small puddle it landed in.
Panel 4 : The amulet is seen rolling off the edge of the dock.
Panel 5 : Tom is reaching out in an attempt to grab the amulet right as it goes over the edge.
Panel 6 : The amulet is seen falling towards the water as it has now made it off the edge of the dock
Tom : (off panel) NOOOOO!!!
PAGE TWELVE (3 panels)
Panel 1 : The amulet is now seen hitting the water with a splash.
SFX : SPLOOOSH!!
Caption : Some people believe with the right angles, they can possess anything they wish…
Panel 2 : Tom lays on the dock, clutching his bleeding arm looking up at Jason. Jason stands over his with his machete raised high in the air, ready to deliver the final blow. Jason is staring intensely at his soon to be victim. Lightning is striking in the background behind treetops. Water is quickly flowing off both man and monster.
Caption : Some people believe nothing is beyond control...
Panel 3 : Close up of Jason’s face, his eyes are very visible in this frame, his pupils are completely dialated, pure blackness. The white of his eyes extremely bloodshot. Blood is splattered across his hockey mask now.
SFX : (off panel) THUUCCK!
Caption : Some people are dead wrong…
Caption : End.
PAGE ONE
Splash page : Its nighttime, a small light blue compact car is seen with headlights glaring pulling up to an archway that reads “Camp Crystal Lake”. The words Crystal lake have been scratched off and the word Blood written over top of it with paint. The car is in partial view as it is coming through the woods. It is raining, and there is lightning seen over the treetops in the background.
Caption : Some people believe with the right angles, they can possess anything they wish…
Caption : Some people believe nothing is beyond control...
Caption : Some people believe they are never wrong…
PAGE TWO (4 panels)
Panel 1 : The blue car has now made its way to the cabin that serves as the main office for the once great campsite. Headlights of the vehicle are still on. The driver side door is open. Inside the vehicle is a man and a woman, early thirties in age. They are looking at each other. The man is wearing a button up shirt and blue jeans while the woman is wearing a sundress with a flower imprint on it.
Tom : You got the keys baby?
Sue : You think I could forget something like that on a night like tonight?
Panel 2 : The lower half of the car is seen from this shot the driver side door is still open and now Tom’s feet hang out of the car touching the muddy ground below him. There is a small splash from the puddle his feet have landed in.
Tom : Well then lets get this party started.
Sue : (off panel) Do you really think he will come?
Tom : He’ll be here soon enough baby. It may just be the two of us baby, but he won’t be able to resist a chance to kill again, I ust hope I can find that paper before he gets here…
Panel 3 : Tom is standing in the rain staring at the main office cabin. Sue is still sitting in the car looking and is now leaning out of the driver side window
Sue : Thanks to Jason this place was a steal in price.
Tom : Yep baby, cheap as dirt, and just think, the reason this place is so cheap is the reason we are here…
Panel 4 : Tom is making his way up the old wooden stairs that lead to the main office. His clothes are now completely soaked. He is whistling.
PAGE THREE (3 Panels)
Panel 1 : A view from inside the main office Cabin, the old wooden door is wide open. Tom stands in the doorway. He is reaching is with his arm feeling the side of the wall for the light switch.
Tom : Come out, Come out, where ever you are…
Panel 2 : A view of the middle of Crystal Lake. In the middle of the lake is a large stone statue of a gargoyle.
Caption : Elsewhere on the campsite…
Panel 3 : Lightning strikes the water near the statue.
Caption : Be careful what you wish for…
PAGE FOUR (2 panels)
Panel One : Large shot of Jason emerging from the water. The Gargoyle can be seen off in the distance behind him. He has one arm on the dock as if he were pulling himself up. His other hand holds an old machete that is showing many signs of rust. The tip of the machete is buried in the water/beach. Water is dripping from everything. The eye holes in the hockey mask are to dark to see anything. The moon is high above the far off treetops and has a slight red tint to it. It is clearly visible despite the rain.
Panel 2 : Close up on Jason’s eyes and water is dripping down his hockey mask. The eye holes are now glowing blood red.
Caption : You may just get it…
PAGE FIVE (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Sue is now standing in the doorway, everything is still dark as Tom is going through a old rusted file cabinet with a flashlight flipping through various old looking papers in folders. Sue’s dress is soaked now become fairly see thru.
Caption : Camp Crystal Lake Main Office…
Sue : Did you find it yet Tom?
Tom : No I am still looking.
Panel 2 : Tom holds tightly in both hands a piece of paper, staring at with his eyes open as widely as possible. Across his face is a evil looking grin.
Tom : here it is, to activate the Amulet of Deception, aim the amulet at the desired target and recite the following…
Panel 3 : Tom’s attention is grabbed away from the paper as Sue walks past him brushing her index finger across his chin as she passes. She has a sultry look upon her face…
Tom : Hexus Manifect(stops due to Sue’s interruption)…
Sue : You know Tom all this stuff, the dark room, the storm outside, the excitement of all this control stuff is really…
Panel 4 : Tom has now grabbed Sue by both arms pulling her close to him, the paper is seen falling to the floor
Sue : Arousing…
Tom : Just think with this amulet we can deceive Jason, control him…
Panel 5 : Tom has now pushed sue up against the wall of the cabin with some force. Sue has a look of pleasure on her face, her eyes closed softly.
Tom : Make him do our bidding, make him take what we want…
Panel 6 : Tom and Sue are seen kissing . Sue’s hand can be seen undoing Tom’s jeans.
PAGE SIX (4 panels)
Panel 1 : Sue is ripping Tom’s button up shirt off, She is facing the door and Tom’s back is to the door, Sue is slightly crouching though so that the only thing in front of her that she can see is Tom. In the doorway stands Jason watching them, machete in hand.
Panel 2 : Tom is grabbing Sue by the hair pulling her up close to his face. The door cannot be seen in this panel.
Tom : All that we desire shall be ours…
Panel 3 : Tom with a fist full of hair is bending Sue over a nearby wooden desk. His other hand is starting to raise the bottom of Sue’s dress. The doorway is visible again but is empty as Jason no longer stands in it.
Panel 4 : Tom is pulling Sue’s head back by her hair, she has a look of pleasure on her face as you can tell he is penetrating her. Her head is pulled back with her ear close to his mouth.
Sue : mmm…
Tom : The world will be ours…
PAGE SEVEN (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Sue is laying on her back on the desk one leg bent with her foot o the table the other leg dangles off the edge of the desk. Tom is sitting in a old wooden chair off slightly to the left. Leaning back in the chair with it tilted backwards resting on a wall. Tom is smoking a cigarette.
Caption : 20 minutes later…
Tom : Sue, honey why don’t you run and grab the amulet out of the glove compartment…
Panel 2 : Sue is in the doorway on the cabin, Tom is still planted comfortably in the chair. Sue has her hand on the door jam and is looking back over her shoulder at Tom.
Sue : That was amazing lover…
Panel 3 : Sue is walking down the steps to the cabin. It is still raining, you can see the car to the left of the panel.
Panel 4 : Sue is bent into the passenger side seat of the car. You can see through the windshield that she is holding up the amulet.
Sue : There you are…
Panel 5 : Sue has now moved out of the window and is standing upright she is holding up the amulet and looking over her shoulder with a frightened look on her face. Jason stands behind her.
Sue : T….T…Tom (whispering)
Panel 6 : A low to ground view as you can see Jason’s feet firmly planted on the ground, Sue’s feet are close to the car, both of them dangling in the air.
SFX : Accckkk
PAGE EIGHT (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Tom is waking out of the cabin his head is down.
Caption : Ten minutes later…
Tom : Damn Woman whats taking so long, did you get lost or what…
Panel 2 : Tom is now looking at the car, and Sue is nowhere to be found.
Tom : Where the hell did the woman run off to.
Panel 3 Tom has made his way to the passenger side of the car. The amulet can be seen laying on the ground slightly covered in a mud puddle.
Panel 4 : Tom is kneeling down and picking the amulet up off the ground.
Tom : (yelling) ALRIGHT COME ON WOMAN, THIS AIN’T HE TIME FOR NO STUPID GAMES!
Panel 5 : Tom is leaning into the passenger side window to grab a flashlight out of the glove compartment. His other hand can be seen sliding the muddy amulet into the pocket of his jeans.
Tom : I swear I’m gonna ring that girl’s neck when I find her…
Panel 6 : Tom is walking off into the woods pointing the flashlight at the ground as he does so.
Tom : Damn wench has me running through these tick infested woods in the middle of the night and during a freaking thunderstorm to top it off…
PAGE NINE (5 panels)
Panel 1 : Tom is emerging from the woods near the dock to Crystal lake, there is an old boat docked there, looks like no one has maintained it for years. Tom is still shinning the flashlight at the ground. His pants are now covered knee high in mud.
Tom : Dammit Woman where are you?
Panel 2 : Tom is walking his way down the dock, shining the flashlight in front of him.
Tom : Maybe the first thing I will make Jason do is rid me of this little tramp…
Panel 3 : Tom is know at the end of the dock flashing the flashlight into the water and looking around.
Tom : I thought the little water rate of a girlfriend may have been down here, but I guess I was wrong…
Panel 4 : Tom turns around to start walking back up the dock but as he turns he bumps face first into Jason’s chest.
SFX : Ummph
Panel 5 : Tom falls to his butt trying to back pedal away from Jason. At the same time he has his hand in his pocket struggling to get the amulet of deception out. Jason is dragging Sue’s dead body behind him by her hair.
Tom : J…J…Jason…
PAGE TEN (5 panels)
Panel 1 : Close up of Jason’s Face, again the eye holes are dark and shadowed so you can’t see his eyes.
Panel 2 : Tom has dropped the amulet of the ground and his hand is blindly trying to find it as Tom refuses to take his eyes off Jason.
Panel 3 : Tom’s hand finally grabs the amulet as he is still scooting backward away from Jason. He is now looking over his shoulder realizing he is at the very edge of the dock.
Panel 4 : Tom now has the amulet pointed at Jason, he is shaking with fear and having trouble concentrating. Jason is still walking forward, still dragging Sue behind him
Tom : H..H..H..ex…Hex…
Panel 5 : Sue’s head is seen crashing down to the dock as Jason releases her.
SFX : THUD
PAGE ELEVEN (6 panels)
Panel 1 : Tom is trying to wipe the water pouring down his face from the rain away from his eyes still aiming the amulet at Jason. Still trying to recite the words to gain control over Jason.
Tom : Hex..xxxus…
Panel 2 : In this view you just see Tom’s outstretched hand, Jason’s hand now firmly wrapped around Tom’s wrist and his machete buried half way through Tom’s hand with blood oozing out of the would. Tom’s hand is now open and the amulet can be seen plummeting to the ground.
Panel 3 : The amulet is seen hitting the dock on edge. Making a small splash in the small puddle it landed in.
Panel 4 : The amulet is seen rolling off the edge of the dock.
Panel 5 : Tom is reaching out in an attempt to grab the amulet right as it goes over the edge.
Panel 6 : The amulet is seen falling towards the water as it has now made it off the edge of the dock
Tom : (off panel) NOOOOO!!!
PAGE TWELVE (3 panels)
Panel 1 : The amulet is now seen hitting the water with a splash.
SFX : SPLOOOSH!!
Caption : Some people believe with the right angles, they can possess anything they wish…
Panel 2 : Tom lays on the dock, clutching his bleeding arm looking up at Jason. Jason stands over his with his machete raised high in the air, ready to deliver the final blow. Jason is staring intensely at his soon to be victim. Lightning is striking in the background behind treetops. Water is quickly flowing off both man and monster.
Caption : Some people believe nothing is beyond control...
Panel 3 : Close up of Jason’s face, his eyes are very visible in this frame, his pupils are completely dialated, pure blackness. The white of his eyes extremely bloodshot. Blood is splattered across his hockey mask now.
SFX : (off panel) THUUCCK!
Caption : Some people are dead wrong…
Caption : End.