My Spiderman draw-off entry

[Bobby Day]

This is my entry for the Spiderman draw-off. I would really appritiate any crituqes you have to offer, thanks!
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4845/spidermanbe3.jpg

[klutchcontrol]

Im reading more random Ninja for this pic! The pose isnt nearly spidy enough.

[Manji]

Try to flesh him out more Bobby.

[Bobby Day]

klutchcontrol : You are right, I didn't see that before you pointed it out. Now I feel like I should give Spidy a katana :). Thanks!

Manji : I agree, I might work on this drawing some more. I wated to the last minute for this draw-off, and didn't leave myself enough time to get the drawing finished.

Thanks for the crituqes guys!

[tboardman]

Yeah I agree with Manji. His right arm and left leg could particularly use some development.

Also, I can't help but get the feeling that he should already be pulling on the next webrope with his left arm... it just seems natural that way.