first time eztoons check out and give tips plz

[lord_shankster]

my frist time using eztoons just playin aroud trying to get the fill of it
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[lord_shankster]

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[kytsunei]

Not much I can tell you: more practice, for starters.
You should compare the frames that are next to each other so things that shouldn't be moving frame to frame don't. Additionally, watch a movie clip of a gun's action: the entire slide moves back, not just the back half.

Keep it up. Not that this is an animation board, but the clips shown at penciljack (see inkthinker's) are pretty damn fun.