Dracula for story

[Manji]

This is a drawing that I am doing for a job. The story has an older and "friendlier" Dracula in it. This is one of 3 drawings that I am doing for it. Please let me know what you guys see wrong with it. Thanks

http://www.headstatic.com/images/forum/drac.jpg

[Justin_A]

I like the Christopher Lee look to this Drucula. My only critique is to maybe drop the hairline a touch. That is the only thing that bothers me. But I do like this piece. Can't wait to see the finished product.

[shag]

might be the hair line, but the top right of his face looks like its being sucked into a vacuum
its a really nice piece though