View Full Version : Rattan and the Dragon
04-14-2004, 03:47 PM
yeah this is for a comic i was doing alone, based on concpets of sci fi and straght fantasy. Sort of putting what square does and turning it into a comic almost. :) different plot though
04-16-2004, 06:03 AM
I really like the concept and the dragon. You've done a good job rendering the dragon and the texture looks nice also. All that slober and spit looks cool too.
For things to work on to improve I'd say the use of blacks first and foremost. Add some more tones in there. I would have darkened or blacked the background then kept most of the figure white. This would really make the figure pop in the foreground.
You should also study how cloth folds and hangs on a person. The cloak on your figure is problamatic. I also loose the right hand of your figure in the picture.
Over all I think it's a pretty cool picture. You should post more.
Oh yea, it's nice to see another charlotte guy. I live in concord right down the road.
04-16-2004, 11:36 AM
Hi! The monster is looking really nice scary yet cute somehow in a Joe Madishly way, its difficult to understand the man standing in front maybe some shadows or something, actually at first you don't see him at all then you will notice the head area but you really need to consentrate a lot to visualise the whole body, I don't think that a drawing should be something that the viewer have to think too hard, it should be visually ready chewed and understandable in that way, but othervice really nice style... sorry for hard critics but this is how I saw it
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