foxmerquise8
03-10-2004, 04:15 PM
I decided that my other story wasn't original enough. Here is another.
Story - This story follows a gunslinger swordsman by the name of Tommy “the Undecided” during the classic spaghetti western times. He gets the “Undecided” handle because of his need to use both a sword and a gun. When Tommy and his adopted brother go into law enforcement to make a name for themselves, they are soon traced and followed by suspicious characters. When its discovered that these characters are after his trusted sword, Tommy decides to get the bottom of the situation. Little does he know that his sword is part of an ancient collection that is owned by British merchants who will stop at nothing to complete it.
Setting - The Old West in the 1880s, more specially Northern Arizona. The story bounces around the West from time to time.
Characters -
Tommy “The Undecided” Hutonghua - The gun slinging swordsman himself. Tommy is a tall Caucasian man with short brown hair. His expressions and mannerisms give off the personality of a brave, but gentle young man. Tommy’s attire consists of various items from the American cowboy stereotype and the traditional Chinese garb. For the most part he has cowboy attire with the exception of his Chinese sunhat and sandals. His weapons include two Chinese swords, one short and one long, and a six-shooter. These swords are tied to him by a samurai type cloth belt. To finish off the look, he walks around with a long grain in his mouth.
Tommy was born Tomas H. Withiny to a rich western family in Northern Arizona. His parents died when he was only six years old during a train robbery. On his deathbed, Tommy’s father, entrusted the well-being of his son to a Chinese employee who had saved his life earlier. This Chinese employee was an immigrant from Beijing who brought his family over for a better life. A close friend to his boss, the immigrant agreed and got a somewhat large sum of money to take care of Tommy. Soon Tommy was learning swordsmanship from his adopted father and even started to excel in it.
Bobby Hutonghua - Tommy’s same aged adopted brother. When Tommy went to join the police force, Bobby went with him. Unlike his adopted brother, Bobby only uses firearms as his weapons of choice. Bobby believes that swordsmanship is a thing of an archaic style that should be phased out of practical law enforcement. Visually, he looks like a young man of Chinese descent and he wears the stereotypical cowboy wardrobe. Bobby’s arsenal contains an assortment of six shooters and the standard sawed off shotgun.
British Artifact Company - This is an archeological and historical company based in Hong Kong and run by British merchants. They have unearthed an ancient sword collection, but one sword is missing, that of Tommy “the Undecided”. Soon they track down the sword and send agents to the American west to retrieved it. They are backed by very powerful museums in England.
Desert Eagle and Desert Fox Two Indian brothers hired by the British Artifact Company as mercenaries. They were hired to retrieved the sword of Tommy “the Undecided”. They wear a mix of Indian and cowboy clothing. Desert Eagle arms himself with creative and deadly arrows that he holds in quiver. Desert Fox arms himself with the standard six shooter and a powerful Winchester rifle.
Story - This story follows a gunslinger swordsman by the name of Tommy “the Undecided” during the classic spaghetti western times. He gets the “Undecided” handle because of his need to use both a sword and a gun. When Tommy and his adopted brother go into law enforcement to make a name for themselves, they are soon traced and followed by suspicious characters. When its discovered that these characters are after his trusted sword, Tommy decides to get the bottom of the situation. Little does he know that his sword is part of an ancient collection that is owned by British merchants who will stop at nothing to complete it.
Setting - The Old West in the 1880s, more specially Northern Arizona. The story bounces around the West from time to time.
Characters -
Tommy “The Undecided” Hutonghua - The gun slinging swordsman himself. Tommy is a tall Caucasian man with short brown hair. His expressions and mannerisms give off the personality of a brave, but gentle young man. Tommy’s attire consists of various items from the American cowboy stereotype and the traditional Chinese garb. For the most part he has cowboy attire with the exception of his Chinese sunhat and sandals. His weapons include two Chinese swords, one short and one long, and a six-shooter. These swords are tied to him by a samurai type cloth belt. To finish off the look, he walks around with a long grain in his mouth.
Tommy was born Tomas H. Withiny to a rich western family in Northern Arizona. His parents died when he was only six years old during a train robbery. On his deathbed, Tommy’s father, entrusted the well-being of his son to a Chinese employee who had saved his life earlier. This Chinese employee was an immigrant from Beijing who brought his family over for a better life. A close friend to his boss, the immigrant agreed and got a somewhat large sum of money to take care of Tommy. Soon Tommy was learning swordsmanship from his adopted father and even started to excel in it.
Bobby Hutonghua - Tommy’s same aged adopted brother. When Tommy went to join the police force, Bobby went with him. Unlike his adopted brother, Bobby only uses firearms as his weapons of choice. Bobby believes that swordsmanship is a thing of an archaic style that should be phased out of practical law enforcement. Visually, he looks like a young man of Chinese descent and he wears the stereotypical cowboy wardrobe. Bobby’s arsenal contains an assortment of six shooters and the standard sawed off shotgun.
British Artifact Company - This is an archeological and historical company based in Hong Kong and run by British merchants. They have unearthed an ancient sword collection, but one sword is missing, that of Tommy “the Undecided”. Soon they track down the sword and send agents to the American west to retrieved it. They are backed by very powerful museums in England.
Desert Eagle and Desert Fox Two Indian brothers hired by the British Artifact Company as mercenaries. They were hired to retrieved the sword of Tommy “the Undecided”. They wear a mix of Indian and cowboy clothing. Desert Eagle arms himself with creative and deadly arrows that he holds in quiver. Desert Fox arms himself with the standard six shooter and a powerful Winchester rifle.