Eye of Rain
11-20-2003, 01:05 PM
Batman
By Jonathan Thompson
Page One
Panel One - Edward Nigma is with two of his thugs in a large truck full of newly stolen diamonds. Nigma has a lot of jewelry on and loving the fact that nothing has gotten in his way. Riddler is sitting in the middle of his two henchmen. One, the driver is very muscular and has a hard look on his face. The second thug is not as built and has smile on his face, feeling that they might get away. Both thugs have Riddler outfits on.
Caption - Look at him.
Panel Two - Bird’s eye veiw of The Riddler’s truck screeching down the streets of Gotham City. A shadow of a bat is seen across the car.
Caption - He thinks he’s gotten away.
SFX - SSCCRREECCHH!
Panel Three - We are back inside The Riddler’s truck and with a front shot of the men inside. The three men all have startled looks on their face, Riddler’s should be the most surprised.
Caption - He really should know better.
The Riddler - NO, NOT AGAIN!
Panel Four - Close up of a bat-rang flying through the air.
Caption - He’s never gotten away before.
Panel Five - Close up as the bat-rang hits one of the tires and pops it.
SFX - POP!
Caption - And tonight will be no different.
Page Two
Panel One - Wide angle, multi-image shot of the semi-truck toppling over after the tire is popped.
SFX - EEERRRRR!
Panel Two - Riddler and his thugs are halfway out of the truck and have their guns out. Behind them is the toppled over semi and before them stands the almighty Batman. Riddler has his arm extended and is pointing at Batman.
Riddler - Get the BATMAN!
Page Three
Panel One - Close up of the Riddler’s thugs firing their guns at Batman.
SFX - BAMN! BAMN! BAMN!
Panel Two - Batman has a couple gas pellets out and throws them at the thugs.
Caption - For some reason they think they can win.
Panel Three - Wide angle shot of the thugs looking aroun in confusion as gas surrounds them.
Caption - They must have forgotten that they are in Gotham City.
SFX - HHIISS!
Panel Four - Close up of Batman’s fist coming out of the smoke and nailing one of the thugs in the face.
SFX - WHP!
Caption - They must have forgotten that this is my city...
Panel Five - Close up of Batman kicking the other thug.
SFX - BAM!
Page Four
Panel One - The gas has settled now and Nigma stands alone infront of the bat. He has a gas pellet in his hands.
Riddler - You think you’re the only one who can do magic tricks BATMAN?
Caption - Nigma has one of my gas pellets. Must have took it off me.
Panel Two - Wide Angle filling 3/4 of the page Shot of the Riddler throwing down the gas pellet and some of the gas begins to surround him.
Riddler - Bye, bye BATS!
Page Five
Panel One - Large left-side shot of Batman punching Nigma through the gas.
Panel Two - Batman goes through the gas and throws Riddler to the ground.
Panel Three - Wide angle shot of Riddler on the ground and Batman getting in his face.
Batman - Don’t get cute with me Nigma.
By Jonathan Thompson
Page One
Panel One - Edward Nigma is with two of his thugs in a large truck full of newly stolen diamonds. Nigma has a lot of jewelry on and loving the fact that nothing has gotten in his way. Riddler is sitting in the middle of his two henchmen. One, the driver is very muscular and has a hard look on his face. The second thug is not as built and has smile on his face, feeling that they might get away. Both thugs have Riddler outfits on.
Caption - Look at him.
Panel Two - Bird’s eye veiw of The Riddler’s truck screeching down the streets of Gotham City. A shadow of a bat is seen across the car.
Caption - He thinks he’s gotten away.
SFX - SSCCRREECCHH!
Panel Three - We are back inside The Riddler’s truck and with a front shot of the men inside. The three men all have startled looks on their face, Riddler’s should be the most surprised.
Caption - He really should know better.
The Riddler - NO, NOT AGAIN!
Panel Four - Close up of a bat-rang flying through the air.
Caption - He’s never gotten away before.
Panel Five - Close up as the bat-rang hits one of the tires and pops it.
SFX - POP!
Caption - And tonight will be no different.
Page Two
Panel One - Wide angle, multi-image shot of the semi-truck toppling over after the tire is popped.
SFX - EEERRRRR!
Panel Two - Riddler and his thugs are halfway out of the truck and have their guns out. Behind them is the toppled over semi and before them stands the almighty Batman. Riddler has his arm extended and is pointing at Batman.
Riddler - Get the BATMAN!
Page Three
Panel One - Close up of the Riddler’s thugs firing their guns at Batman.
SFX - BAMN! BAMN! BAMN!
Panel Two - Batman has a couple gas pellets out and throws them at the thugs.
Caption - For some reason they think they can win.
Panel Three - Wide angle shot of the thugs looking aroun in confusion as gas surrounds them.
Caption - They must have forgotten that they are in Gotham City.
SFX - HHIISS!
Panel Four - Close up of Batman’s fist coming out of the smoke and nailing one of the thugs in the face.
SFX - WHP!
Caption - They must have forgotten that this is my city...
Panel Five - Close up of Batman kicking the other thug.
SFX - BAM!
Page Four
Panel One - The gas has settled now and Nigma stands alone infront of the bat. He has a gas pellet in his hands.
Riddler - You think you’re the only one who can do magic tricks BATMAN?
Caption - Nigma has one of my gas pellets. Must have took it off me.
Panel Two - Wide Angle filling 3/4 of the page Shot of the Riddler throwing down the gas pellet and some of the gas begins to surround him.
Riddler - Bye, bye BATS!
Page Five
Panel One - Large left-side shot of Batman punching Nigma through the gas.
Panel Two - Batman goes through the gas and throws Riddler to the ground.
Panel Three - Wide angle shot of Riddler on the ground and Batman getting in his face.
Batman - Don’t get cute with me Nigma.