Mizuno
11-17-2003, 05:32 PM
I named it "Id", not "I-D" like in "identification"
The motivation of this story is simple but it gets complicated as the events unfold.
Alaida, a spunky ten year old bears a secret very few people know about, even her older punk sister Mina.
Always pointed as the "weird kid" in school she goes down every afternoon to an old building where there used to be a school. There, she says, she has "friends", which can only talk back to her, but remain invisible to the rest of the world.
One day, after a nasty encounter with Mina's friends, she flees into her mysterious hideout and is never heard from again.
Mina feeling like the number one guilty on this decides to follow her down,...but first she must figure out how she did it.
The answer; a tiny black lunchbox where Alaida keeps her darkest secrets.
Once she finds herself surrounded by the walls of the ancient school she'll encounter a set of unknown perils; faceless and eyeless creatures and the mystical presence of Abel; the most seducing stranger she has ever seen...
At the beginning it sounds like a childish plot,...the catch is, both Alaida and Mina don a supernatural force known as the Id. Along with it they can unleash their deepest desires or the creepiest nightmares. With these two pre-teens and dreamy male characters who knows what will happen?...
I seek inspiration in shojo anime and manga, but I try not to make it seem too corny. Instead I'd like to give it a more adult feel including explicit scenes, but well-handled.(Imagine a thirteen year old Mina waking the next morning with Abel by her side...)
The motivation of this story is simple but it gets complicated as the events unfold.
Alaida, a spunky ten year old bears a secret very few people know about, even her older punk sister Mina.
Always pointed as the "weird kid" in school she goes down every afternoon to an old building where there used to be a school. There, she says, she has "friends", which can only talk back to her, but remain invisible to the rest of the world.
One day, after a nasty encounter with Mina's friends, she flees into her mysterious hideout and is never heard from again.
Mina feeling like the number one guilty on this decides to follow her down,...but first she must figure out how she did it.
The answer; a tiny black lunchbox where Alaida keeps her darkest secrets.
Once she finds herself surrounded by the walls of the ancient school she'll encounter a set of unknown perils; faceless and eyeless creatures and the mystical presence of Abel; the most seducing stranger she has ever seen...
At the beginning it sounds like a childish plot,...the catch is, both Alaida and Mina don a supernatural force known as the Id. Along with it they can unleash their deepest desires or the creepiest nightmares. With these two pre-teens and dreamy male characters who knows what will happen?...
I seek inspiration in shojo anime and manga, but I try not to make it seem too corny. Instead I'd like to give it a more adult feel including explicit scenes, but well-handled.(Imagine a thirteen year old Mina waking the next morning with Abel by her side...)