Ghost Rider

[xadrian]

Greetings all, this is the next Art Jam here in projects forum. It will be run by foxmerquise8 off a script he wrote. As of this post he will be in charge so listen to what he has to say, and have fun. If anyone needs anything, please don't hesitate to contact me.

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The Script.

Characters -

Hazuki Tonguru - The protagonist of the story. He is a 17 or 16 year old japanese person.

Hazato Tonguru - Hazuki father, not too old. Works for the policemen general

Shinjuku - One of the villians. Has a lot wise cracks. He is in the whole ninja getup. He wears a scarf around his neck and at the end it tapers into a fine mist. Like all ninjas you can only see his eyes. He is armed with his throwing stars and a sword (which is black). His secondary color (the color of his scarf and belt and the such) is a mix of blue and green.

Zabato - Big samurai guy, not to musclur, but not fat either. He wears the traditional samurai getup (robe and stuff), but it is on fire. Its hard to explain, but his clothes are made up of a cloth of fire. Does talk to much (but not like robot). He doesn't talk to much because he can't get a word inwise. He is not a gentle brute (oxymoron?), show don't get that idea.


Samurai Ghost Rider - What Hazuki turns into. Wears a samurai robe (like kenshin), but its white with a black outline. Wears a sun hat like raiden. His eyes always giving off embers (you can't see his eyes, just the flames coming out of it). He carries a chain and sickle over his back (instead of just a chain like the regular ghost rider). He also weilds the penace sword (which has the same effect of the penace stare. If you don't know, it makes the victim feel all the pain he has caused to other people.



Page 1

Splash Page, A shot of the ghost rider at a 3/4 angle. He is in traditional Japanese house at the time, which is burning around him. Rafters are falling, and one big rafter has fallen behind him and lies at an angle from for the floor to the roof.
Old Man Voice - In the Japanese mythos, there was once a legend of a great samurai who was killed by the most corrupt of men. Valiantly he fought, but no man can stop an army. When he died he was given a proper burial and something much greater, he was changed into the spirit of vengeance. Vengeance personified and set ablaze. Now the spirit wanders aimlessly, looking for....

Page 2

P1 - A small Japanese boy is lying in bed (one of those Japanese beds, that’s on the floor). An old man sits next to him, giving hand motions (implying he is talking). All this is being seen from outside a door (like the view of someone looking from a door).
Voice (coming from the door) - I told you not to tell him those ghost stories dad.

P2 - A horizontal box across the page

Text- Ten years later

P3 - A man is nailing a wooden sign to a tree (with Japanese letters on it, the sign should be longer vertical then it horizontal). The man is standing a stool to reach the place where he is nailing. A teenage boy is next to him.

Hazuki - Why are you putting that sign up dad?

Father - The government commissioned me to do a sign; they say it is to warn people about two assassins running about.

Hazuki - Assassins?

Father - They have already killed two government officials.

Page 3

P1 (Half the page, cut horizontal) - The scene is in a dark room at night. To the left of the panel Shinjuku is crouched on top of a tall bookcase, below him standing on the floor is Zabato with his sword out partially on fire. To the right of the panel a Japanese man in a business suit cowers in fear by his desk. Maybe a window and a door somewhere in the picture (if you do a window have some rain or lighting).

Shinjuku - You should have realized you were next in line.

Man in Suit- Why are you doing this.

Zabato - We are paid to assist your journey to the after life, although are employer has a far different reason.

Shinjuku - I hope you don't have that many relatives.

P2(Half of the space left, after the P1 was done, cut vertical) The man is slashed by Zabato's sword which is on fire, some dash lines on the picture (or whatever you guys use to show speed now a days. The man in the suit looks like he is in pain (make it look kind of exaggerated).

P3 (The rest of the space left) 3/4 view of Shinjuku with Zabato behind him (but not too close behind, maybe far enough back that you can at least see his legs).

Shinjuku - I guess we should make our way to the policeman general's house.

Page 4

P1 (1/3 of the page cut horizontally, now use 1/2 of the first cut vertical) Hazuki and his father walking toward a traditional Japanese house at the time. They are at the bottom of the stairs (there is only about 2 or 3 stairs). Somewhat dark and snowing.

P2 ( the other half of the first tier of boxes) The paper door opening.

Father- Be polite

P3 (the rest of the page) A bald old man sitting on the flood sipping on tea (sake?) in a room (traditional Japanese style room). Hazuki and his father are walking in the door.

Bald Man - Come in from the cold, oh I see you brought your son also.

Father- Yes

Bald Man- You didn't have to bring him this early in the morning, but now that he is here, he can see how business is done.

Father - I have urgent news, another government official has been killed and you could be next.

Bald Man - Don't be silly Hazato ... do you smell eggs?

Page 5

P1 ( 1/3 of the page cut vertically) The paper door of the house is being singed at the top; some of the door has already been burnt. You can see part of the floor in this shot too.

Voice - That’s not eggs, that is the smell of brimstone.

P2 (The rest of the page cut horizontally, the top) The bald man, the father, and Hazuki are standing and looking at the door in distress (which is now on halfway burnt diagonally revealing Zabato). The cup of tea is on the ground spilled.

P3 (The rest of the page) Zabato slashes the wall that the door is on in half

Page 6

P1 (1/3 of the page cut diagonally) Frontal view of Shinjuku face.

Shinjuku - Hello, gentlemen. I think you should say goodbye, to Mr. Tai

P2 (1/2 of the rest of the page, cut horizontal) A shot of the bald man, the father behind him. The room is starting to catch on fire.

Bald Man - What are you?

Voice - Your guide to the afterlife.

P3 (the rest of the page) Shinjuku throws ninja stars at the bald man and the father, the trail of the start is black and they go 3 through them.

Page 7

P1 (1/2 page cut in half vertically) Hazuki kneels and holds his father in his arms, with tears coming down his eyes. Blood is on the father's robe. The bald man is slumped over dead to the back of the picture.

Hazuki - Father!!!!!

Father- Run Hazuki, and protect the family ::last breath:;.

P2 (the rest of the page) Hazuki bursts through the paper wall (opposite to the one with the door on it)

Voice - How touching ::sniff:: if I wasn't evil I would be bawling right now.

Voice2 - Should we chase him?

Voice - Lets give him a head start, I want to have some fun.

Page 8

Splash Page - We see Hazuki from the back view ( at a distance, although distinct enough to tell its him). He is running toward a large forest (no leaves on the trees) and it is snowing. Above the forest is a fading imagine of head of the ghost rider.
Voice - And so the legend goes that he now looks aimlessly for someone with enough valor to house the spirit of vengeance. Engulfed in the flames of vengeance, which flare when innocent blood is spilled, Hazuki Tonguru, becomes justice taken form and given life. Riding a black horse with a mane of dying embers, he is the spirit of vengeance, the Ghost Rider.

Page 9

P1 (1/3 of the page cut vertically) Hazuki's body is on fire, and light is coming out of his eyes and mouth. His hands grabbing his head and he looks to be in intense pain

P2 (The second of the 1/3 page cut vertically) Part of Hazuki is in his clothes (the top) and the bottom is in the ghost rider costume. Same pose as the last panel.

P3 (The rest of the page) The ghost rider looking cool. Frontal view.

Page 10

P1 (1/2 of the page cut horizontal) Shinjuku and Zabato looking around. In the forest with trees around them and snow.

Shinjuku - That boy is resourceful; to bad we have to kill him.

Voice - Innocent blood has been spilled, vengeance will be served.

Shinjuku - Who is are? show yourself.

Voice - I am Vengeance'

P2 (The rest of the page) The ghost rider is standing in the forest with his sword drawn and he appears to be in an attacking stance. There is evidence in the trees a clash has taken place (broken branches and fallen trees.

Page 11

P1 (1/3 of the page cut horizontally) The faces of Shinjuku and Zabato, they don't look amused.

Shinjuku - Its nice, to meet you... um what was it, Vengeance? Sorry we have to kill you, but as you can see we are in a bit of a rush.

P2 (1/3 of page cut horizontally, under the first panel) Zabato is in the process of chopping down a tree. Its on a tilt (the tree) showing its in the process of falling.

P3 (1/2 of what is left of the page cut vertically) The ghost rider jumps you can see his from move up in the air and do a flip.

P4 (The rest of the page) Zabato's and Ghost Rider swords collide and create an explosion

[foxmerquise8]

Hello, I new to the boards, but I'm very ambitous to do this. I have to get offline soon, so post any questions and I'll get to them as soon as I can. More info to come.

[Solace]

I'll do page 10. Is there going to be a specific model sheet that we go from, or will each page just feature the artist's representation of the description provided? Just asking, because I'd really like to interpret it on my own.

-sol

[nate lovett]

if you'll have me i'll do page 9.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok I'm back on. What do you guys want to do pencils, ink, colors, or the whole page? (you can do all if you want). I was hoping for the representation of the characters to be somewhat uniform. But, if you really want you can do some character sheets.

This what I need

Pencillers - As many as I can get
Inkers - See above
Colorists - See above
Letters = 2 or 3

You can be in more then on catagroy.

I also need character sheets for

Hazuki
Hazato
Zabato
Shinjuku
Ghost Rider


Also if you guys want you can do a cover shot, you can do anything you want for the cover (to an extent). So give me some ideas for the cover

[Paul Brian DeBerry]

i letter and would like to help out.

[foxmerquise8]

Your going to letter all the pages?

Also are the two other people, are you doing the whole page by yourself?

[nate lovett]

i'm only going to have time to do the pencils. but i do agree about the character sheets. i can work on ones for GR, and hazuki, since there on my page. and i'll throw you some cover ideas if it's cool.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, I'll put you down for it. Can you get on aim, so we can hammer out the details?

Also for everyone else, if there are no colorist, by the time all the inks are done, then we can go black and white like magna. If only one or two colorist join, then they can do the splash pages and color (although if you want to do any of the other pages and not the splash pages, do tell).

[Mike]

I would like to pencil and ink page 2 (yeah, I know I dropped coloring the last thing in order to do drawing.. I suck as a colorist, anyway), but I need some clarification as to what, if anything, is happening in panel 2 of page 2.

Also, it seems to read that it's 3 panels that are pretty non-sequitor as far as the thinking involved with them goes. Is this correct? I know it's going to be the same location.

[foxmerquise8]

The second panel is just white text over a black background.

I don't understand what your asking. My aim is foxmerquise8 and my email is foxmerquisemc@yahoo.com if anyone else has questions.

[foxmerquise8]

Page 1 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none

Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors none

Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink none Colors none

Page 11

Character Sheets

Hazuki - Raede
Ghost Rider - Raede
Hazuko - Mike
Zabato - Mike

Letterers - Paul Brain DeBerry

[Lyzander]

I'll grab page 1 pencils and inks if that's okay. Any idea on deadline as I have to fit this in around work. As soon as Raede gets the style sheets done, I'll get cracking. If I have time, I might like to take page 3 as well if there are no takers...

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, I'll put you down for both, although I need the character sheets for Zabato, Shinjuku, and Hazato still.

[Mike]

I'll do sheets for Hazuto and Zabato, if you'll have me on them.

[foxmerquise8]

Please talk to me before you start the character sheets (and pages). My aim is foxmerquise8.

I will probably make the pages black and white (like magna) if no one joins for inking. But I'm really hoping for colr.

[foxmerquise8]

Script with corrections

Page 1

Splash Page, A shot of the ghost rider at a 3/4 angle. He is in traditional Japanese house at the time, which is burning around him. Rafters are falling, and one big rafter has fallen behind him and lies at an angle from for the floor to the roof.

Old Man Voice - In the Japanese mythos, there was once a legend of a great samurai who was killed by the most corrupt of men. Valiantly he fought, but no man can stop an army. When he died he was given a proper burial and something much greater, he was changed into the spirit of vengeance. Vengeance personified and set ablaze. Now the spirit wanders aimlessly, looking for....


Page 2

P1 - A small Japanese boy is lying in bed (one of those Japanese beds, that’s on the floor). An old man sits next to him, giving hand motions (implying he is talking). All this is being seen from outside a door (like the view of someone looking from a door).

Voice (coming from the door) - I told you not to tell him those ghost stories dad.

P2 - A horizontal box across the page

Text- Ten years later

P3 - A man is nailing a wooden sign to a tree (with Japanese letters on it, the sign should be longer vertical then it horizontal). The man is standing a stool to reach the place where he is nailing. A teenage boy is next to him.

Hazuki - Why are you putting that sign up dad?
Father - The government commissioned me to do a sign; they say it is to warn people about two assassins running about.
Hazuki - Assassins?
Father - They have already killed two government officials.


Page 3

P1 (Half the page, cut horizontal) - The scene is in a dark room at night. To the left of the panel Shinjuku is crouched on top of a tall bookcase, below him standing on the floor is Zabato with his sword out partially on fire. To the right of the panel a Japanese man in a business suit cowers in fear by his desk. Maybe a window and a door somewhere in the picture (if you do a window have some rain or lighting).

Shinjuku - You should have realized you were next in line.
Man in Suit- Why are you doing this.
Zabato - We are paid to assist your journey to the after life, although are employer has a far different reason.
Shinjuku - I hope you don't have that many relatives.

P2(Half of the space left, after the P1 was done, cut vertical) The man is slashed by Zabato's sword which is on fire, some dash lines on the picture (or whatever you guys use to show speed now a days. The man in the suit looks like he is in pain (make it look kind of exaggerated).

P3 (The rest of the space left) 3/4 view of Shinjuku with Zabato behind him (but not too close behind, maybe far enough back that you can at least see his legs).

Shinjuku - I guess we should make our way to the policeman general's house.


Page 4

P1 (1/3 of the page cut horizontally, now use 1/2 of the first cut vertical) Hazuki and his father walking toward a traditional Japanese house at the time. They are at the bottom of the stairs (there is only about 2 or 3 stairs). Somewhat dark and snowing.

P2 ( the other half of the first tier of boxes) The paper door opening.

Father- Be polite

P3 (the rest of the page) A bald old man sitting on the flood sipping on tea (sake?) in a room (traditional Japanese style room). Hazuki and his father are walking in the door.

Bald Man - Come in from the cold, oh I see you brought your son also.
Father- Yes
Bald Man- You didn't have to bring him this early in the morning, but now that he is here, he can see how business is done.
Father - I have urgent news, another government official has been killed and you could be next.
Bald Man - Don't be silly Hazato ... do you smell eggs?



Page 5

P1 ( 1/3 of the page cut vertically) The paper door of the house is being singed at the top; some of the door has already been burnt. You can see part of the floor in this shot too.

Voice - That’s not eggs, that is the smell of brimstone.

P2 (The rest of the page cut horizontally, the top) The bald man, the father, and Hazuki are standing and looking at the door in distress (which is now on halfway burnt diagonally revealing Zabato). The cup of tea is on the ground spilled.

P3 (The rest of the page) Zabato slashes the wall that the door is on in half


Page 6

P1 (1/3 of the page cut diagonally) Frontal view of Shinjuku face.

Shinjuku - Hello, gentlemen. I think you should say goodbye, to Mr. Tai

P2 (1/2 of the rest of the page, cut horizontal) A shot of the bald man, the father behind him. The room is starting to catch on fire.

Bald Man - What are you?

Voice - Your guide to the afterlife.

P3 (the rest of the page) Shinjuku throws ninja stars at the bald man and the father, the trail of the start is black and they go 3 through them.


Page 7

P1 (1/2 page cut in half vertically) Hazuki kneels and holds his father in his arms, with tears coming down his eyes. Blood is on the father's robe. The bald man is slumped over dead to the back of the picture.


Hazuki - Father!!!!!
Father- Run Hazuki, and protect the family ::last breath:;.

P2 (the rest of the page) Hazuki bursts through the paper wall (opposite to the one with the door on it)

Voice - How touching ::sniff:: if I wasn't evil I would be bawling right now.

Voice2 - Should we chase him?

Voice - Lets give him a head start, I want to have some fun.


Page 8

Splash Page - We see Hazuki from the back view ( at a distance, although distinct enough to tell its him). He is running toward a large forest (no leaves on the trees) and it is snowing. Above the forest is a fading imagine of head of the ghost rider.


Voice - And so the legend goes that he now looks aimlessly for someone with enough valor to house the spirit of vengeance. Engulfed in the flames of vengeance, which flare when innocent blood is spilled, Hazuki Tonguru, becomes justice taken form and given life. Riding a black horse with a mane of dying embers, he is the spirit of vengeance, the Ghost Rider.


Page 9

P1 (1/3 of the page cut vertically) Hazuki's body is on fire, and light is coming out of his eyes and mouth. His hands grabbing his head and he looks to be in intense pain

P2 (The second of the 1/3 page cut vertically) Part of Hazuki is in his clothes (the top) and the bottom is in the ghost rider costume. Same pose as the last panel.

P3 (The rest of the page) The ghost rider looking cool. Frontal view.


Page 10

P1 (1/2 of the page cut horizontal) Shinjuku and Zabato looking around. In the forest with trees around them and snow.

Shinjuku - That boy is resourceful; to bad we have to kill him.

Voice - Innocent blood has been spilled, vengeance will be served.

Shinjuku - Who is are? show yourself.

Voice - I am Vengeance'

P2 (The rest of the page) The ghost rider is standing in the forest with his sword drawn and he appears to be in an attacking stance. There is evidence in the trees a clash has taken place (broken branches and fallen trees.



Page 11

P1 (1/3 of the page cut horizontally) The faces of Shinjuku and Zabato, they don't look amused.

Shinjuku - Its nice, to meet you... um what was it, Vengeance? Sorry we have to kill you, but as you can see we are in a bit of a rush.

P2 (1/3 of page cut horizontally, under the first panel) Zabato is in the process of chopping down a tree. Its on a tilt (the tree) showing its in the process of falling.

P3 (1/2 of what is left of the page cut vertically) The ghost rider jumps you can see his from move up in the air and do a flip.

P4 (The rest of the page) Zabato's and Ghost Rider swords collide and create an explosion

[foxmerquise8]

Any ideas for the title of this. I was thinking Ghost Rider: Far East, but that sounds kinda cheezy.

[nate lovett]

here's the character sheet for hazuki.

http://www.geocities.com/lovettworks/art/hazukisheet.txt

and just in case that dissapears.....go here (http://www.deviantart.com/view/3810692/)

i should have GR up by tommorrow at the latest. i'm hoping for tonight, but i've got to get some other stuff done first, so we'll see.

[foxmerquise8]

Nice work, although when I try to save it to my computer, it comes up as a text file.

[nate lovett]

yup. that's because it's hosted on geoshitties. but if you click the link, you can get a jpeg, from deviantart.

[Paul Brian DeBerry]

Originally posted by foxmerquise8
Nice work, although when I try to save it to my computer, it comes up as a text file.

just change it to a "JPG" before you save it.

[foxmerquise8]

If anyone is wondering you can still sign up. I really want this to be a good project. I actually just watch this topic all the time on my computer to see if anyone posted.

[xadrian]

I haven't done a cover in a while. If you need one, I'd like to sign up for it.

[foxmerquise8]

Well I had someone else in mind, but I doubt he is going to do it. So I'll sign you up for that. Are you doing pencils, inks, colors or everything?

[xadrian]

I'll do pencils to start, and if no one wants inks I'll do that to, but I'm no inker.

[foxmerquise8]

I'll think of a cover

[jal]

i'll pencil/paint page 6.

[Mike]

Done with designs. Click it>>>> http://wally.pgbco.com/Designs

I'll flesh out dad a little more. I was pretty stumped because I couldn't figure out what he'd wear. I'll have to do a little more research on him and see what I can get for a semi-official cop-like guy.

[Blairdesigns]

I'm down for page 11. I have an inker and colorist in mind. I'll have them check this out and see if they want in. BTW, I added you to my contacts, my AIM is ddigglesworth.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, I added all of you. Also Mike, the website is not loading when I go to it. Jal, I'm assuming paint means ink, if it means something else then tell. Also Hazato just wears the robe thing that most japanese men wore at the time.



Page 1 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none

Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors none

Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink Solace Colors none

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors none


Character Sheets

Hazuki - Raede
Ghost Rider - Raede
Hazuko - Mike
Zabato - Mike
Shinjuku - Jal

Letterers - Paul Brain DeBerry
Cover Xadrian (Pencils)


We still need more inkers and colorist if anyone wants to join. Pencils are need for 4 more pages.

[Mike]

It looks like my parent site is down for the moment. It should be back up by this afternoon.

[nate lovett]

here's ghost rider...

http://www.geocities.com/lovettworks/art/ghostridersheet.txt

or here...http://www.deviantart.com/view/3835778/

[xadrian]

Oh crap, I didn't realize Raede had said he'd do some cover ideas. My bad guys.

[jal]

i can do the entire art for pg 6. not just inks/ pencils;mrt;

[nate lovett]

Originally posted by xadrian
Oh crap, I didn't realize Raede had said he'd do some cover ideas. My bad guys.


hey man, it's no problem. i said i'd try to come up with at least an idea. but i'm totally cool with you doing it.

besides that's just the character sheet.

[foxmerquise8]

Everything is coming along nicely, we almost have all the pages signed up for, and all of the character sheets will be done soon.

As for the cover, I'll let you guys throw some ideas out and we can see which one is the best. Although I have some ideas for the presentation (logo and such.)

[jal]

i'll take pg 7 too. the whole artness. pencils/inks/colors

[foxmerquise8]

I added you for page 7 Jal. This is coming along nicely. I still need inkers and colorists if anyone wants to do that. I also still need pencillers for 3 more pages.

Solace are you still there, I'm assuming you still waiting for the character sheets to post, can you just drop on by and say something. I know you were in the forum (I watch this topic like a hawk).

[Solace]

I'm still around, i was jsut waiting for the char sheets before i started drawing. I'm not really talkative though, so you'll only really see me post when i have art ready. I planned to ink and color my own page, and i'll probably throw out a cover idea as well.

-sol

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, I was going to think of a cover idea, but it seems everyone has one so, we can just vote or something. I kinda feel like the fifth wheel since I'm not doing anything.

Before anyone starts the pencils, we need to make sure everyone has the details straight.

[Ian Miller]

Hey, Fox, I know I spoke to you already, but I'd like to do page 8, pencils and inks. If there's a shortage of colorists and letterers, I can use watercolors, seeing as I can't color in Photoshop for beans, and I'd probably have to hand-letter the page. If this is too antiquated a method for you, then I can just stick to pencils and inks.

[nate lovett]

if it comes down to it, i probably can fit in inking and coloring my page. but that is if no one else wants to do it.

[foxmerquise8]

You have been added.

Hey Raede, I know your around, can you get on aim.


Also to the others in the topic. I'm going to post an update of everything going on soon.

[foxmerquise8]

Also, Mike I know your around here somewhere also. So can you get on aim too. I shouldn't be watching the board this closely, hehe.

[Lyzander]

Do we have a deadline for pencils yet?

[foxmerquise8]

Update Week 2 (November 16th)

Every week, I give an update on how the project is going. So far its going great, we have alot of talented artists line up for the pages, although we still need more. Well anyway, this is the updated list of all things taken.


Page 1 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none

Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors none

Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink Solace Colors none

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors none


Character Sheets

Hazuki - Raede
Ghost Rider - Raede
Hazuko - Mike
Zabato - Mike
Shinjuku - Jal

Letterers - Paul Brain DeBerry
Cover Xadrian (Pencils)


Now I'm going to post the deadline for pencils, obivously the people with zabato and shinjuku in their page, won't be able to start yet, so they will have a different deadline.

The following have a Dec. 2 deadline for pencils:

Lyzander - Page 1
Mike Page 2
Jal Page 7
UniverseX259 Page 8
Raede - Page 9


When the other sheets are done, I'll post the deadlines for those pencils. Also, Jal , are you working on the character sheet Shinjuku.

[jal]

i'll have the character sheet for shinjuku this Wes. if that's aiight wit y'all.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, can you get on aim to hammer out some details?

[Mike]

Hey all. No offense to anyone, but I'd really like to drop out of the design end of those two characters. I've given it several different tries (only one of which I've posted) and I can't seem to come close to what Fox has told me he wants.

I'd still like to be down for page 2, since I can at least start drawing backgrounds and add the figures in when designs are complete.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, anybody want to fill in the sheets for Zabato? Mike the one for Hazuko is fine (except for the robe thing being a bit high, but we don't need a new sheet for that).

[foxmerquise8]

I found someone to the character sheet for zabato.

[foxmerquise8]

Just to note, the trees in the story should have no leaves, considering its snowing, implying its winter.

Sorry for the inconvience.

[Brian Germain]

I haven't seen what this ghost rider looks like if you already have sketches of him, but I am interested in doing the frount splash page, if it is still open... I would be willing to do pencils and inks and even colors if I have to but I am sure there are waaay better colorists for the job... what is open anyway? well let me know.

thanx

-Brian Germain
Dark Elf Designs (http://www.darkelfdesigns.com)

[Brian Germain]

I guess you already have someone for page 1 please disregard my last post...

-Brian Germain
www.darkelfdesigns.com

[fusciart]

I'll take on pages 4, 5, & 8 if they're not taken.

Pencils, inks, & colors that is.

[xadrian]

fox - just an update, I had a late night with the kid so I didn't get anything scanned, but I'll put up my cover sketches tonight so you can greenlight or change anything before I start

[foxmerquise8]

fusciart, I'll put you down for page 4 and 5, 8 is taken. Brian Germain, there is no pencils left, but I still need someone to ink page 9 and 11. The character sheet for ghost rider is on page 4, I beleive.

Fusciart, Page 4 (just pencils) is due on Dec 2


Page 1 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none

Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 4 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 5 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors none
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink Solace Colors none

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors none

[fusciart]

When are the roughs/thumbnails due?

[foxmerquise8]

Dec 2, just for page 4 though (since some of the characters on page 5 don't have sheets yet). This is just pencils.

[Ian Miller]

Wow! 4, 5, and 8, Fusciart? Pencils, inks, and colors? You're da proverbial "bomb." Wow, you could actually do all that for the jam?

[foxmerquise8]

Only 4 and 5, Universe you have 8. hehe

[Ian Miller]

Oops. I knew that, Fox. :D

[xadrian]

http://www.polariscomics.com/artwork/gr_cover.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Thats great, ghost rider might have to be a little bigger to pull off the whole illusion thing, but thats probably me, everything else is great.

[Blairdesigns]

Ok. I drew up a character profile thingy for Zabato at the request of Fox. It's a link, so don't be lazy.

Zabato Profile (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/3898535/)

Fox, and everyone else, I need some feedback. Thanks.

BTW, he's supposed to be covered in fire, but I did the best I could with the space i had on the paper... and I hate drawing fire lol...

[foxmerquise8]

Thats real nice, I guess we will go with that.

[fusciart]

I can't download Blairdesigns page. It's too big.

Here's my roughs.

Page 4

http://www.angelfire.com/comics/fuscia/Ghost_Rider_Page_4.jpg

Page 5

http://www.angelfire.com/comics/fuscia/Ghost_Rider_Page_5.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Thats great, but we have a letterer, if you don't want to do the text bubbles.

[foxmerquise8]

Remember its early in the morning (so the sky is somewhat dark), and its snowing.

[Ian Miller]

Here's what I have so far of page 8. A lot of the detail got lost in the scanning process, but it should show up when inked. I'm still working on it, but I'd like to know if anything looks wrong or whatever before I finish.

http://www.angelfire.com/comics/imartups/GR_PJ_Jam_Page_8_Pencils.jpg

[fusciart]

Originally posted by foxmerquise8
Thats great, but we have a letterer, if you don't want to do the text bubbles.

Wow, man you're easy to please:)

This is just a rough. I put the word baloons in to see if it works or not.

I'll be putting in the snow and sky effects in with photoshop.

[foxmerquise8]

Well It was great so I there was nothing to say, I also don't want to seem to bossy. Since you asked for 3 pages, and I only gave you two, do you want to color or ink a page or something.

[fusciart]

Um, I don't know. Let me finish these 2 pages first.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok.

Also if anyone else wants to join, I still need inkers and alot of colorist.

[Blairdesigns]

Originally posted by fusciart
[B]I can't download Blairdesigns page. It's too big.




Yeah, sorry bout the size, i'll resize it so it can be viewed easier.

[fusciart]

Originally posted by UniverseX259
Here's what I have so far of page 8. A lot of the detail got lost in the scanning process, but it should show up when inked. I'm still working on it, but I'd like to know if anything looks wrong or whatever before I finish.

http://www.angelfire.com/comics/imartups/GR_PJ_Jam_Page_8_Pencils.jpg

Hey UniverseX259,

I like what you have here but it looks a little flat, too much white space, and symetrically its dead on in the middle of the page. I added a little thumbnail of how this could work better.

Maybe have windy snow falling at an angle and tree reference is a must. I'm not the editor here so use this at your discretion.

http://www.angelfire.com/comics/fuscia/Thumbnail_page_.jpg

[Ian Miller]

Yeah, I've been working on that page some more since I posted it. I'm afraid that if I make it at that angle, I'll screw it up, but I agree that it does look more interesting. In addition, I've added more trees and added more on to the ground, like snow and footprints and such.

[foxmerquise8]

Issue 2 is up in the Writer's Desk forum if anyone wants to read it. The Shinjuku character sheet should be here soon also.

[foxmerquise8]

I'm still here if anyone wants to join.

[foxmerquise8]

Here are all the character sheets except Shinjuku.


Hazuki
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3810692/

Ghost Rider
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3835778/

Zabato
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3898535/

Hazato
http://wally.pgbco.com/Designs/hazato

[fusciart]

Here's what I think Zabato should look like.
http://www.angelfire.com/comics/fuscia/zabato.jpg

I see him with scar tissue on one side of his face and maybe a blind eye.

I think Hazato needs to be more masculine. He looks like a farmer more than a cop.

[foxmerquise8]

Wow, thats like the fifth Zabato sheet. We'll use Blairdesigns character sheet as the standard for now. I'm not an artist, so I don't know if people can put that head on Blairdesigns' character design, but we have to set a standard.

So lets have a vote,

Scared face or Non scared face.

Voting ends on Wensday.

[foxmerquise8]

Update Week 3 (November 23rd)

Its the start of the third week of the project. This project is shaping up very nicely. I wrote the script for the second issue if you want to read it. Its in the writer's desk forum. I really want some feedback. Anyway, back to the project. I have about a thousand character sheets for Zabato, we are using blairdesigns' one, but the others will go on the website we will have for the comic. They are going to be in a DVD extras type section.

Any suggestions for the website, like the design and such. Here is the info for the pages and such, nothing has really changed, but we still need alot of colorists and inkers.

The Shinjuku character sheet should be up soon also, Jal has it, but his computer has a virus, so I'm not sure when he can get it to me.

Page 1 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none

Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 4 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 5 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors none
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink Solace Colors none

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors none

Character Sheets

Hazuki - Raede
Ghost Rider - Raede
Hazuko - Mike
Zabato - Mike
Shinjuku - Jal

Letterers - Paul Brain DeBerry
Cover Xadrian (Pencils)


The following have a Dec. 2 deadline for pencils:

Lyzander - Page 1
Mike Page 2
Jal Page 7
UniverseX259 Page 8
Raede - Page 9


Can the people that have the Dec. 2 deadline post what they have so far?

[Ian Miller]

Scar. Zabato should definitely have a scar. Definitely. Definitely have a scar. Definitely (Said in best Rain Man impression).

[jal]

http://www.weistudio.net/jal-image/ninja.JPG

http://www.weistudio.net/jal-image/ninja2.JPG

sorry for the digital images. (scanner probs)

these are the sheets for SHINJUKU. if any of u guys have probs or questions., hit me up. i'll do my best to fix.

peace

[jal]

Originally posted by xadrian
http://www.polariscomics.com/artwork/gr_cover.jpg

omg. go go go:)

[Nic]

hey I know I m late but it was a hard time for me in the last few weeks so I wasn t sure if I could havehadelt it ut ow I would love to do ahole page means pencils innks and colors
any chance?
if not i would like to color raedes lines after they got inked
but as I said before I d love to do a hole page if anyone wannts to give me one of his

Thanx Cya
:D

[foxmerquise8]

Well I doubt anyone will give up there pencils. But you can do the inks and colors for Raede. I also need inks and colors for some other pages. Just post which ones you want.

[foxmerquise8]

So Nic, are you still in the project

Also does everyone think the can make the deadline, most of you I haven't even heard of for weeks.

[nate lovett]

i should be able to meet it, i'm just having some difficulty getting the first panel to look interesting.

[xadrian]

I don't know when my deadline is, Dec 2nd? I'll definitely have pencils by then. Probably this weekend.

[foxmerquise8]

Now that all the character sheets are done here are the deadlines.

Pencils

Dec 2.

Lyzander - Page 1
Mike Page 2
Jal Page 7
UniverseX259 Page 8
Raede - Page 9


Dec. 12th

Lyzander - Page 3
fusicart - Page 4
fusicart - Page 5
Jal - Page 6
Solace - Page 10
Blair - Page 11
Xadrian - Cover

[Paul Brian DeBerry]

i'll help out with the web design. also check these two site for some free space.

www.1and1.com
www.netfirms.com

just some ideas

[fusciart]

Have we decided on the scar tissue issue?

[Nic]

ok I m gonna color reades lines

Cya

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, I'll put you down for it Nic.

Fusicart, I don't know, I guess without, because I put it up for vote and only one person voted. I'm not sure if they will be able to put your head, on the other's body when doing the picture.

[foxmerquise8]

Here is the updated sign up list. It is also seems alot of people are having trouble with the pages, just tell me if you need help.

B]Page 1[/B] Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none

Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 4 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 5 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors Nic
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink Solace Colors none

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors none

[foxmerquise8]

Hello again, if your pencils are due Tuesday, you can just post them in this topic.

[xadrian]

cover pencils done

http://www.polariscomics.com/artwork/grcover.jpg

I have a 300 dpi tiff file for anyone who wants to ink it.

I'll ink it if I have to.

[jeremy dale]

Ben, you crazy sonuva-- NICE! Seriously, man, I LOVE this cover. GREAT job!

Jeremy

[Bruce Lee]

Ben,

This cover is great-- PRO-level, in fact. It really shows that you've been working hard, and that things are starting to come together for you. Well done, amigo!

Loston
http://www.lostonwallace.com

[fusciart]

I'll ink it only if I can color it.

[foxmerquise8]

You have the go to do both fusicart.

[fusciart]

Cool. Xadrian, private message me the hi res.

[foxmerquise8]

Can you provide an ink before you do a cover fusicart? For the extras section I'll put up when the issue is done.

[fusciart]

yeah.

[xadrian]

uploading the large file now, it's 15+megs so let me know when you have it. I'll PM you when it's available.

[Solace]

Is Zabato wearing a mask on page 10? He's holding an Oni mask in the sketch. Just want to clarify.

-e

[foxmerquise8]

Nope

[Lyzander]

Sorry guys, I've got to bail on page 1, I've just got some urgent paying work come in. I'll try and go ahead with page 3 if that's cool?

[fusciart]

I'll take it.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok lyzander, now fusicart has the page.

Thanks alot fusicart, you are really taking on alot of the work.

[fusciart]

Inks to cover. I plan on doing the snow, shading, and background trees in photoshop.

http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Ghost%20Rider%20Inks.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Thats great, now I just have to think of a logo/title for the cover.

[fusciart]

What are the costume colors?

In the first page is Ghost Rider in his skeleton form?

[foxmerquise8]

Black with a white tream and he is in his skeletal form.

[fusciart]

Here's a work in progress for the colors. What should the background be like?

http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Ghost%20Rider%20colors.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

AWESOME, you must have a third arm or something, being able to do all this work. The background should be a dark and at night time.

[fusciart]

Iv'e got some questions about page 1. Is he angry or sad. Is he standing or kneeling. I'm not sure what a 3/4 angle is.

[foxmerquise8]

His face is plain, but you can't really tell anyway since his head is a skull (do you have the ghost rider character, it seems like your unsure about what he looks like).

He is standing and holding his sword.

This is what I mean by 3/4 view http://polykarbon.com/tutorials/newface/3quarter1.htm just a bit tilted to the side instead of a profile. Of coarse it would be the whole body in your case. Although I want ghost rider facing the right (as opposed to the left seen in the link).


I hope that answers your questions

[Solace]

There's an extra comma at the end of your link that throws it off. I'm sure most people will catch it, but i thought i'd let you know so you could fix it.

-e

[Brian Germain]

that messed me up it makes an error report for me

[foxmerquise8]

Thanks I corrected it.

[foxmerquise8]

The following have pages due Today. Please Post them in this topic

Dec 2.


Mike Page 2
Jal Page 7
UniverseX259 Page 8
Raede - Page 9

[foxmerquise8]

Does anyone have their page done?

[Ian Miller]

I'm workin' on it. I'll only be able to have the original page done by then. I've been pretty busy lately and haven't been able to do the newer version.

[Ian Miller]

Here be my page. If it suXX0rs majorly, I'll re-do it the other way that Fusciart suggested.

http://www.angelfire.com/comics/imartups/GR_PJ_Jam_Page_8_Pencils_Final.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Try fusicart suggestion.

Where is everyone pages? The deadline was Dec 2, yesterday. I don't want to sound mean or overbearing, but does anyone have their pages done. I don't think 2 weeks was too short a time.

If you have an reason why its late, atleast tell me.

[fusciart]

Roughs for page 1.

http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Roughs%20page1.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Thats great fusicart, just a few things, sorry if this is too nitpicky.

1) Can you take out that oldman's head in the first word box thing.

2) But bandages over the arms, like in the cover.

3) The hand a tid bit crooked, but I assume thats just because this is a rough.

Otherwise, great.

[xadrian]

Hey guys, make sure if you don't have your pages in to get with fox about when you can, otherwise let him know so he can get someone else. Deadline's come and gone and it's fair game now.

Feel free to contact me as well if you have any issues or questions and I'll try to help out.

[foxmerquise8]

Mike and Raede. If you don't reply to this topic by Sunday, I will have to give your pages away, no offense. Jal already contacted me

Remember the rest of you have pages due the 10th (pencils).

[foxmerquise8]

I have kinda lost control of this project, I'm taking the bull by the horns and bring it back. Update! Here are the things that are taken so far. The items that say none is what is still open.

Page 1 Pencils fusicart (Done) Ink fusicart Colors fusicart
Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 4 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 5 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 (Done) Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors Nic
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink Solace Colors none

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors none


Here are the pencil deadline list.

Dec 2.

fusicart - Page 1 (Done)
Mike Page 2 (Late)
Jal Page 7 (Excused)
UniverseX259 Page 8 (Done)
Raede - Page 9 (Late)


Dec. 12th

Lyzander - Page 3
fusicart - Page 4 (Done)
fusicart - Page 5 (Done)
Jal - Page 6
Solace - Page 10
Blairdesigns - Page 11
Xadrian - Cover (Done)


Here are the inked deadline list (or the start of)

Dec. 20

fusciart - Page 1
fusciart - Page 4
fusciart - Page 5
UniverseX259 - Page 8

[Um...What?]

I'm coloring the cover so maybe it could be an alternate. Also I could color a page or two if the time limit isn't to tight .:)

[nate lovett]

yeah, mine's late, sorry. i've had alot of stuff come up. since there no one inking mine, i guess i'll do that too. and i'll get it up here asap. again, sorry guys.:(

[foxmerquise8]

Raede - Ok just try to get it in very soon. Remember its just the pencils so far.

Um What - I guess we can use an alternate cover. I still need someone to color Page 2, 3, 10, and 11. Time limits are usually 14 days (two weeks).

I'm trying to get as many people in this Jam as possible, no point in having a group project if the group is only 3 or 4.

[Brian Germain]

Originally posted by foxmerquise8
Raede - Ok just try to get it in very soon. Remember its just the pencils so far.

Um What - I guess we can use an alternate cover. I still need someone to color Page 2, 3, 10, and 11. Time limits are usually 14 days (two weeks).

I'm trying to get as many people in this Jam as possible, no point in having a group project if the group is only 3 or 4.

when I firast read about this thread I started thinking of something in my head for a samurai ghost rider... I am interested in doing a pinup and perhaps a logo.. either way you might like the pinup I have started to sketch i will try to get it finished real quick (it's basically what I thought of when I read splash page 1)...

-Brian

[foxmerquise8]

Brian, what do you mean? Your take on the ghost rider?

Anyway go ahead with it.

Also to everyone else, page 2 is open for everything now.

[Brian Germain]

yeah, I realize that probably isn't very helpful but I just thought I would share with people who are interested... plus i thought if you haven't got a logo yet maybe I can come up with something rockin'!



-Brian

[foxmerquise8]

Can I see the sketches of it so far?

For the logo, it will just be some pencil jack thnig. For the title, I was thinking of like splatter font thing or a font that resembles japanese characters, and then it would kind slashed in half and displaced like the killbill logo.

I hope that makes sense.

[Solace]

I got bored last night, so did mine early.

http://enginezero.net/grp10.jpg

And before anyone asks, no, i won't fix or change anything. I'm kinda backed up on other projects, and won't have time to do anymore with this. If this version isn't suitable for the project, feel free to hand my page off to another participant. Sorry in advance for any trouble that might cause.

-e

[foxmerquise8]

Thats one nice page.

[Solace]

Thanks. I had to rush it, so i'm glad you like it. I don't know if i'll be back to the folder too much since i've finished. If possible, PM me when the projects done. I'm really interested in seeing the final product.

-e

[foxmerquise8]

Ok. The only thing that bugs me a bit is that they are looking up, I think I'm the only one who will notice that though.

[Popninja]

Originally posted by foxmerquise8
Ok. The only thing that bugs me a bit is that they are looking up, I think I'm the only one who will notice that though.

Because of the way Solace angled the shot, we're looking up at the two guys in the top panel, so it really appears that they are looking across, and not so much up.

Just my measly two pennies.

[foxmerquise8]

I see

[fusciart]

Colors for the cover.

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/richfuscia/Ghost_Rider_colors.gif

[foxmerquise8]

Wow thats great, stick around fusicart (and anyone in the forum) I have some ideas for the title font

[Um...What?]

I thought the Samuri Ghost Rider's robe was white with black trim.:confused:

[foxmerquise8]

Actually I do have it as that in my description, but it was changed when Raede did the character sheet. It will be fine if you did it that way though.

Also Raede, when can I expect the page? Its has almost been a week after the deadline.

[Brian Germain]

Ok for those of you just joining this thread lemme explain myself... When I originally read hte first part of the thread I joined in kinda late, and not only that i didn't know there was a samurai ghost rider character already (heck i still am not sure) but at anyrate the prospect sounded cool and there are a bunch of different cool things you could do with sucha character concept... anyway before I blab my head off (too late) here is my sketch that I started at the beginning of this thread before i figured out what was going on and stuff... there are some notes in the sketch as well, as I was deciding how to draw him anyway like I said it's very very sketchy but it was an idea for the layout of the first page even though it is the worng angle and the building snow and trees aren't very prevalent.. anyway just go look ! LOL

http://www.darkelfdesigns.homestead.com/files/ghostridersamurai.jpg


-Brian

[foxmerquise8]

Here are the character sheets

Hazuki
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3810692/

Ghost Rider
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3835778/

Zabato
http://www.deviantart.com/view/3898535/

Hazato
http://wally.pgbco.com/Designs/hazato

Shinjuku
http://www.weistudio.net/jal-image/ninja.JPG

[nate lovett]

sorry to do this to you guys, but i was hoping to get this done during my free time, which is now, basically nil. i've got alot of other stuff going on, and that i need to do, so i'm not going to be able to get this done. again, guys i'm sorry. my plate's just too full at this time.:(

[foxmerquise8]

Ok, page 9 is open now.

[fusciart]

Can I have it? This could be the coolest page.

[foxmerquise8]

Sure, I was hoping for someone else though to keep the artwork diverse, but you can have it.

[fusciart]

This will be the last page. I'll have the finished pencils for the last 3 pages I did up in a couple of days.

[foxmerquise8]

ok

[Brian Germain]

wow no comments... that's cool it sucked anyway, as it was just a sketch and it had no real bearing on this thread... lol but just wanted to show ya what I was messin with before i figured out GRsamurai looked the way he did...

[foxmerquise8]

I'm trying to make a title and logo thing, any suggestions on font that would fit the story.

[Brian Germain]

I have been messing around with the logo too (as i said I would) and I think that the Hiroshima font is interesting against a background of japanese characters... it might be good to get the spelling of ghost rider in Japanese/ chinese and layout american in hiroshima font in whit over top of a darker, flaming set of japanese character in th background...

I also know you were looking for that scripted painted look and I have been messing with something along thoselines as well.. but I will have to show you rather than describe I think..

-brian

[foxmerquise8]

Can you post that font?

[Brian Germain]

I sent you an e-mail with the link to where you can download that font... not sure how to post fonts here


-Brian

[Brian Germain]

WOW I just noticed I am no longer a junior member, I am now a member! but I still can't post attachments... that includes images yes?

-Brian

[psico]

Guess whos back?!?!
Is there a page open for a colorist?!
I know I came late.. but now I fixed almost all my problems.. I wouldnt mind doing one page..

And lettering, again, I'm all up for it...

And I'm glad to be back...
its been a while I dont color anything.

[foxmerquise8]

11 and 3 need coloring.

As for the others remember some of you need to turn in your pages on friday.

Dec. 12th

Lyzander - Page 3
fusicart - Page 4 (Done)
fusicart - Page 5 (Done)
Jal - Page 6
Solace - Page 10
Blairdesigns - Page 11
Xadrian - Cover (Done)


Here is the people who need to meet that deadline.

[fusciart]

Here are the finished pencils for pages 1,4, and 5.
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/richfuscia/Ghost_Rider_Page_1.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/richfuscia/Ghost_Rider_Page_5.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/richfuscia/Ghost_Rider_Page_6.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Those are great. You should post them in the drawing table.

[fusciart]

Naa. Let them come over here.

[cabralsoth]

wow!!! fusciart these look great!!! i love the splash page.

[psico]

I get 3 or 11... whatever works bettter for you guys.. I mean.. I kinda got here a little late...
plus.. you will have to put me up for the color schemes...

[fusciart]

Originally posted by cabralsoth
wow!!! fusciart these look great!!! i love the splash page.

Thanks man. I love your Doc Strange piece over at the arena. You got my vote!

You should do a page for Ghost Rider. I'll ink it and color it.

[cabralsoth]

thanks dude, i would love to work on a page with ya, only problem is i got too many projects between this week and next, maybe after i finish if there are any slots open we can hit it up. :D

[foxmerquise8]

These are the pages due today. Please post them in this topic

Lyzander - Page 3
fusicart - Page 4 (Done)
fusicart - Page 5 (Done)
Jal - Page 6
Solace - Page 10 (Done)
Blairdesigns - Page 11
Xadrian - Cover (Done)

I still need someone to do page 9

[Nlas Sim]

If you are searching someone to color I would be interested....

[fusciart]

I thought I was doing page 9.

[fusciart]

Colors to page 1.

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/richfuscia/Gost_Rider_Page_1_Colors.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Oh yeah, my fault, fusciart.

[foxmerquise8]

Oh yeah, thats great. Although I do have some comments about it.

- The fires seems a bit monotone, I mean it doesn't seem like its blazing in the room, can you add a little more red or orange to give the fire a little more flare.

Other then that its all good, sorry if that sounded a bit harsh.

[foxmerquise8]

Lyzander and Blairdesigns, I need the pencils for your pages. Can you please post them.

[Blairdesigns]

I completely forgot this was due. I've been insanely busy with 2 jobs lately, so I apologize. I'll get this crackin' ASAP.

[foxmerquise8]

okay.... ::Sigh::

[Nlas Sim]

I ask again, perhap you don't have seen me.... :(
I would like to color one or two pages and so can someone of you tell me if there is something to color for me.... *please*
and excuse my english, i'm from germany....

Nico

[foxmerquise8]

My fault, somehow I passed over your post. Let me check to see if there is anything left.

[Spidey]

Im on page 2 pencils now.

[foxmerquise8]

UPDATE 12/14

Sorry Nlas Sim, there are no colors left. Sorry. Spidey I have added you to the list.

And here is the list.

Page 1 Pencils fusicart (Done) Ink fusicart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
Page 2 Pencils Spidy Ink Spidy Colors Spidy
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors psico
Page 4 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 5 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 (Done) Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors Nic
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace (Done) Ink Solace (Done) Colors Solace (Done)

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors pisco


Here are the inked deadline list (or the start of)

Dec. 20

fusciart - Page 1
fusciart - Page 4
fusciart - Page 5
UniverseX259 - Page 8

[Nlas Sim]

Ok, thx... I'll be waiting for the next project....
greetz
Nico

[fusciart]

Here's page 1 revamped. I added more red to the fire, glazed alot of it with yellow, and dropped in "scratched" dialogue to see how it would look.

http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/GhostRiderPage1Colors.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Thats better, I like the glow effect on ghost rider, you should post this in the drawing table.

[foxmerquise8]

If you don't reply by Wensday, lyzander, I will have to give away your page.

Blairdesigns, when can I expect the page?

[fusciart]

What color is Hazato's robe?

[foxmerquise8]

Dark blue

[fusciart]

Finishes to page 4.

http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Ghost%20Rider%20Page%205%20Colors.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Thats great, I really like the sky, sorry for being nitpicky, but I have to ask for a few changes.

- Hazato and Hazuki look kinda pale, the bale man looks a bit pale too. Maybe you should at some more vivid tones.

- I thought you was going to have it snowing, I probably didn't put it in the script so you can change it only if you want to.

Sorry if there is any inconvience.

[fusciart]

Re worked page with scratch lettering.
http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Ghost%20Rider%20Page%205%20lettered.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Nice, its kinda hard to read the lettering though, but I think that is just me, you can leave it like that if you please.

Can everyone else see the text find?

[foxmerquise8]

Here is the updated list. Since lyzander didn't reply, popninja will take his place.


Page 1 Pencils fusicart (Done) Ink fusicart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
Page 2 Pencils Spidy Ink Spidy Colors Spidy
Page 3 Pencils Popninja Ink none Colors psico
Page 4 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusciart (Done)
Page 5 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart Colors fusciart
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 (Done) Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils fusciart Ink fusciart Colors Nic
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace (Done) Ink Solace (Done) Colors Solace (Done)

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors pisco

[foxmerquise8]

So far 30% of the project has been done, we should be around 50% according to deadlines.

I'm not trying to rush anyone, but if you can, try to get done what you can as soon as you can.

[fusciart]

Can I ink Popninja's page?

[foxmerquise8]

Sure.

[fusciart]

Finishes to page 6.
http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Ghost%20Rider%20Page%206%20Colors.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Thats great, it seems like I wrote the panels out of order though.

Thats a great page.

[fusciart]

Roughs for page 9.
http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/G.R.%20ROUGH.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

WOW, thats your best page yet, I love the expression on ghost rider, I didn't imagine that the page would be this good.

When you do the inks and colors, make the page background black.

[xadrian]

welcome to the fusciart jam ;)

[fusciart]

LOL!

[Um...What?]

I finished coloring the cover and I was wondering if I and whoever else colored it could have a poll. The winning pic will be the cover and the other will be the alternate.

How does that sound?

;dvl;

[foxmerquise8]

I doubt anyone would vote for it, since only about 5 people come to this topic. I'll just put both up on the cover page. Can you post the pic.

[xadrian]

I'm going to have to nix the voting idea. It was suggested in the Conan jam, but since the spirit of the Project forum is colaboration and not competition, it'll have to be first come first serve.

However, PLEASE feel free to color it and post it and it will be included as an alternate cover or pinup.

Let's keep this thing going guys.

[fusciart]

Finishes to my last page. Forgot which one.
http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Ghost%20Rider%20Page%209%20Colors.jpg
Happy Holidays Everyone!

[foxmerquise8]

Thats great

[Um...What?]

Ok, I'll post it soon. :)

[Um...What?]

Actually, when does it need to be in? It's finished but I have to
re-register with DiviantArt again, but my e-mail isn't working so I need to get a new one. With X-mas tomorrow I don't feel like doing all of that now. I will try to do it before the deadline though.

[foxmerquise8]

You post it whenever you want, if you want to sooner, just get on aim and send it through aim direct connection, my aim name is foxmerquise8

[foxmerquise8]

Now that christmas is over, here are your deadlines.

Pencils Due for Janurary 10th

- Spidy
- Popninja
- Blairdesigns

Inks Due for Jan 10th
- UniverseX259

Colors Due for Jan 10th
- Jal


If deadlines are not met you page will be taken away, I already you guys enough slack, alot of this stuff should have been done already.

[Ian Miller]

Here are my redo pencils. I've been taking kinda long with them, and so I decided to post what I have, and then finish it when I ink it after I get crits and stuff.

http://www.angelfire.com/comics/imartups/GR_PJ_Jam_Page_8_Pencils_Redo.jpg

[foxmerquise8]

Better, now ink it and maybe some more trees in the background, taller trees.

[Ian Miller]

Yes, sir!

http://www.cfdrodeo.com/images/salute.gif

[fusciart]

UniverseX259 this looks good but it could be better.

The running figure is a little small and his left foot is forming a tangent with the edge of the panel. You should bring him in more and make him fill the panel more. There should be more trees around him. The gost's flaming eyes need more flames. Here's some improvements I made to help you and use as a template.
http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Example.jpg

The skull's nose needs to have an arc at the top. Here are some examples to help you.
http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Skull%20Example.jpg

I also found this Wrightson print to help you with the trees. Add textures and details to the trees in the foreground and sillohette the trees in the background.
http://roachsrealm.com/Rich/Tree%20Example.jpg

[Ian Miller]

Alright, cool, Fusciart. I'll fix it up as soon as possible.

[fusciart]

Take your time with it and come up with a killer page.

I also forgot to mention that those light blue outlines are snow being kicked up.

Have fun.

[Solace]

You've gotten some great help from Fusciart, but on other thing you might consider is flipping the page when you're done. Actions that follow the readers path from left to right are more dynamic on a page, and convey greater urgency.

[Spidey]

Well I just got fired from my penciling duties for not finishing up my Indy page so I guess I'll have more time to finish this up by the deadline. In fact Im gonna get started right now and shoot for for that due date.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok

[foxmerquise8]

Popninja dropped hos page, so page 3 is now up for grabs again.

Here is an updated list of who has what and things that are done. Are you still there Jal?


Page 1 Pencils fusicart (Done) Ink fusicart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
Page 2 Pencils Spidy Ink Spidy Colors Spidy
Page 3 Pencils none Ink none Colors psico
Page 4 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusciart (Done)
Page 5 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusciart (Done)
Page 6 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 7 Pencils Jal Ink Jal Colors Jal
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 (Done) Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace (Done) Ink Solace (Done) Colors Solace (Done)

Page 11 Pencils Blairdesigns Ink none Colors pisco

[Spidey]

Hey fox, let me get page 3 better. more action.

[foxmerquise8]

Are you still doing page 2?

[Spidey]

Uh no sorry. Only have time for one. I was thinking maybe I can trade in 2 for 3, but whatever its up to you. I really just wanted to draw the cowardly ninja.

[foxmerquise8]

Ok......

[foxmerquise8]

Its January 10 and things are do, this is what is do. Please post the pages here in the topic today. Page 2 is still open.

Pencils
- Spidy
- Blairdesigns

Inks Due for Jan 10th
- UniverseX259

Colors Due for Jan 10th
- Jal

[foxmerquise8]

No one has their pages, this is starting to annoy me just a bit, I have given some of you guys over a month to do these pages.

Now there alot of pages open.

Pencils are open for Page 2, 3, 6, 7, 11. Colors are needed for 6 and 7. Inks are needed for 2, 3, 6, 7, 11.


Page 1 Pencils fusicart (Done) Ink fusicart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
Page 2 Pencils none Ink none Colors none
Page 3 Pencils none Ink none Colors psico
Page 4 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusciart (Done)
Page 5 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusciart (Done)
Page 6 Pencils none Ink none Colors none
Page 7 Pencils none Ink none Colors none
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 (Done) Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace (Done) Ink Solace (Done) Colors Solace (Done)

Page 11 Pencils none Ink none Colors pisco

[fusciart]

Well, I said I would'nt do any more but I'll finish this bad boy up if you want me to.

[foxmerquise8]

I'll wait and see, its not really a collaboration project if only 3 people do work on it.

[foxmerquise8]

If no one joins soon, I might have to end this project. More and more people are dropping their pages or just not coming to the topic.

At this point, only 4 people have turned in pages.

[--=DJ=--]

i'm on page 2. p & i.

[Cuddly]

Any chance I could pencil a page?

Are you still using the script as it appears on the first page of this thread?

[Vegeta]

I'll help pencil a page if you need some help still.

[foxmerquise8]

I'll put you on the list DJ. Your Page is due on the 26.

Vegeta and Cuddly you can pick from Page 3, 6, 7, 11. The script is the one on the first page (although there is a revised version on the second page).

Also only sign up if you can make the two week deadline, because I don't want more people dropping their [age.

[Cuddly]

I'll take pencils on page 3.

I'll have some questions for you as I digest the script for page 3, foxmerquise8. I might PM you or post here on this thread.

[Vegeta]

Originally posted by foxmerquise8

Vegeta and Cuddly you can pick from Page 3, 6, 7, 11. The script is the one on the first page (although there is a revised version on the second page).



I'll pencil page 11.

[cabralsoth]

howdy, i can hit up 6&7 if you like, i recently came across some free time i can use to stretch my drawing fingers...pencils, i will post... lemme know

[foxmerquise8]

Wow that was quick, I'll put you guys down. All of you guys have a due date of Jan 26th.

[foxmerquise8]

Page 1 Pencils fusicart (Done) Ink fusicart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
Page 2 Pencils DJ Ink DJ Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Cuddly Ink none Colors psico
Page 4 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusciart (Done)
Page 5 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusciart (Done)
Page 6 Pencils cabralsoth Ink none Colors none
Page 7 Pencils cabralsoth Ink none Colors none
Page 8 Pencils UniverseX259 (Done) Ink UniverseX259 Colors UniverseX259
Page 9 Pencils fusciart (Done) Ink fusciart (Done) Colors fusicart (Done)
fusciart

Page 10 Pencils Solace (Done) Ink Solace (Done) Colors Solace (Done)

Page 11 Pencils Vegeta Ink none Colors pisco

[fusciart]

My Conan Comrades to the rescue!!!

[Cuddly]

Originally posted by fusciart
My Conan Comrades to the rescue!!!

LOL! Let's get this big boy locked down and finished off ASAP!

[cabralsoth]

Originally posted by fusciart
My Conan Comrades to the rescue!!!


http://www.the11thhour.com/archives/122000/features/images/comics02.jpg

[cabralsoth]

could you provide a pic of what Shinjuku looks like please... i tried looking thru all the pages but couldnt find a pic of what he looks like. thanks.

[fusciart]

I think Jal took the character designs down.

The only one I could find was Solace's page.

Solace's Page (http://www.penciljack.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=39998&perpage=10&pagenumber=15)

[foxmerquise8]

http://www.weistudio.net/jal-image/ninja.JPG

http://www.weistudio.net/jal-image/ninja2.JPG

There you go