Even more pages of "PANTS!"

[artronin9]

Even more pages of "Pants"!

... and here are the first ten pages if you missed them. PANTS (http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pants.htm)

http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pants10.JPG
page10
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/page11web.jpg
page 11
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/page12web.jpg
page 12

[artronin9]

http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/page13web.jpg
page 13
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/page14web.jpg
page 14

Feel free to comment and all that fun stuff!

[TheFightingFoetus]

Haha! That is some cool stuff.

You've obviously put a lot of energy into this, and it turned out well.

Good luck with the rest of this.

[bleistift]

very nice stuff,

you got great style, the storytelling is good and the characters have life.

i am really looking forward to read the rest of the story!
so keep it on :)

[EddieChingLives]

Everything looks and reads amazinly well. I didn't pay much attention to any problems in any panels because the story just moved me right along. Wonderful storytelling!!! Just watch the language. We wanna keep it PG-13 in here. We don't want any Mom's to ground their kids for looking up stuff on penciljack.

[xadrian]

Attention to detail is really nice.

[RavioliDog]

that first panel is just awesome
....pure awesomeness
.....
and the fact that the comic is called "pants"...
man...thats awesome too
this comic is way too awesome



i need a thesaurus

[Spidey]

Interesting story so far. You really did give Josh some life. The monkey, the kids. Theyre all great. Eddie is right, the stoy really flowed quite nicely.
I also really like the way you split up the first 6 panels on page 14, nice touch.

[Reilly]

Great story man! You really sucked me into the story, I can't wait to read more.
The only question I have is where does it take place? Is he in an empty comic book store or is the kid just a serious basement boy, like the guy from Mallrats?

--Reilly

[nightfingers]

PANTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !


Good flow, nice pacing, you my friend are half way there.;)