13th
09-07-2003, 06:45 PM
Hello,
This is the first sequential page I have ever been responsible for from start to finish. I enjoyed the experience, tweaking the writing whenever I wanted, choosing my own camera shots, etc. I am posting here to get some feedback on this first effort. Specifically, I have two questions:
-Should there be a page two, or should I try a new story?
(ie, is this interesting at all)
-Are there any pointers for the next page I do (whether it be of this or another story)- changes, strengths, weaknesses?
Many Thanks.
13th
http://www.thirteenthstory.com/scansnz/northwinddraft.JPG
This is the first sequential page I have ever been responsible for from start to finish. I enjoyed the experience, tweaking the writing whenever I wanted, choosing my own camera shots, etc. I am posting here to get some feedback on this first effort. Specifically, I have two questions:
-Should there be a page two, or should I try a new story?
(ie, is this interesting at all)
-Are there any pointers for the next page I do (whether it be of this or another story)- changes, strengths, weaknesses?
Many Thanks.
13th
http://www.thirteenthstory.com/scansnz/northwinddraft.JPG