Hulk/Wolverine page

[Ribs]

hmm... see if this works...


crappy-scan 2000.
http://www.angelfire.com/ca/ribs/hulk1.jpg

[statezero]

big red x of doom for me :(

[blamito]

yup

[EddieChingLives]

Woo Hoo! It works!

[Caimano]

Not bad at all, the last panel is funny.

My two cents: I'll change the first two panels, drawing just one panel where we can see Hulk and the house in a less stiff pose

The panel where hulk hits Wolvie...show Wolvie smashed there, just to create a "connection".

Just my opinion tho:o

[jar]

Yeah. To be blunt. Stale. Honestly. You have shown that you are trying to place 2 characters in the same environment, but it doesn't really show. You should include at least a panel or two of each other in there if you want to get it across.

Try using different angles as well.

Nice line works!

[Logan Fray]

Ahahaha, what a funny fight, i though it looked good in my mind it all flowed smoothley to a short animation.

[EddieChingLives]

Nice artwork. But a nice shot of Wolvie and Hulk in the same shot might help establish spacial relationships.

Oops. Allready been said by jar...

Read, Think, Post....Read,Think,Post.... How do I keep forgetting that?

[Ribs]

thanks for the comments guys.