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DEVin
09-01-2003, 01:24 AM
http://server31.totalchoicehosting.com/%7Eghettob/devin/art/pageone.jpg
http://server31.totalchoicehosting.com/%7Eghettob/devin/art/pagetwo.jpg
http://server31.totalchoicehosting.com/%7Eghettob/devin/art/pagethree.jpg
http://server31.totalchoicehosting.com/%7Eghettob/devin/art/page4.jpg
http://server31.totalchoicehosting.com/%7Eghettob/devin/art/page5.jpg

s'all done! more are coming for sure.

Carter
09-01-2003, 01:38 AM
Redrum...

--Carter--

jacon
09-01-2003, 04:34 AM
cool. in the three panels of you on the bottom it looks like you have a unibrow

markenglert
09-01-2003, 05:02 AM
...panel 3 is my favorite.

Logan Fray
09-01-2003, 09:44 AM
Its a great strip but i dont get the last one maybe cut that out..

Gwendi
09-01-2003, 09:58 AM
Good job, I really like the fonts you used...:) I also like your expression in panel one...

-G

Justin
09-01-2003, 10:55 AM
Hilarious!

I like how he's saying nothing in the 1st panel in the bottom row... good times.

What in the hell do you use to ink? Because it looks good.

-Justin

Wishmaster
09-01-2003, 10:57 AM
hahaha i totally love your stuff, and here's one great masterpiece again! those 3 lower panels a killers! haha love it bro, can't wait for page 2..

Paul M.
09-01-2003, 11:24 AM
I like it, even the font. but, I kind of wish the black were solid

DeForgeo
09-01-2003, 12:03 PM
Panel one is the greatest thing you've ever drawn. In fact, the expressions in all of these are great.

jacon
09-01-2003, 02:58 PM
Originally posted by Paul M.
I like it, even the font. but, I kind of wish the black were solid yeah, listen to paul

statezero
09-01-2003, 05:20 PM
cant wait to see page 2!

Crimson Spider
09-01-2003, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by jacob_phatty
yeah, listen to paul

Yeah, listen to Jacob.

Unibrow-lad!

skatermonkey
09-02-2003, 01:41 AM
"..."
"maybe"
"yes"



Hahahaha ****in' sweet!

zaklamp
09-02-2003, 09:39 AM
Originally posted by DeForgeo
Panel one is the greatest thing you've ever drawn. In fact, the expressions in all of these are great.


what he said :) , the ears are pure genius and so is your entire pose and attitude in that pic really :)

DEVin
09-02-2003, 07:36 PM
Thanks everyones, I'll fix the black thing soon.


uh yeah...PAGE 2!

Crimson Spider
09-02-2003, 07:41 PM
Regarding page 2:

As I told you on AIM, "Oh, man, you look so sexy without your shirt on..."

No, wait! That's what you told me. Perv.

But that page rocks anyway.

jhymanator
09-02-2003, 08:18 PM
this is hella funny
it think "now its time to die" is a bit over used

MightyMatt
09-02-2003, 09:00 PM
This is really great Devin, you are really outdoing yourself. I am curious as to if you decided your shirt to start changing logos as of page 2 or that was your original intentions.
The panel with the guy pulling out the guns is kinda looking surreal...I don't know if you wanted to go with that, but some clarity on the 2nd page panel before the last might be needed.
matt

Deimos
09-02-2003, 09:15 PM
Funny and twisted.

I like movement on the fat guy drawing his machine guns.

It reminds me a lot of Jhonen Vasquez' Johnny the Homicidal Maniac.

Not as dark, but the logo on the t-shirt constantly changing is directly borrowed from him.

Gwendi
09-02-2003, 10:41 PM
Pretty neat...I like the empty speech balloons. Those moments of silence are great. :)

-G

statezero
09-02-2003, 10:43 PM
i want a watch that shows me when its time for tea and for death! and damnit to hell, no man should miss family matters! that urkel and carl winslow are two sexy beasts!

*edit* J5 FRICKEN RULES!!! kudos on the excellent taste in music sir!

Jon
09-02-2003, 11:05 PM
Thats rad, Devin

DEVin
09-03-2003, 02:15 PM
TAHNKS.

Yeah, J5 is awesome.

So is Blackalicious and the roots. and some others.

King Sockmunkey
09-03-2003, 02:22 PM
thats funny ****ing shit. hellarious.

Logan Fray
09-03-2003, 02:32 PM
Ahahhaha, Page 2 is awsome...


"i Miss Family Matters"

well you can still catch it on TBS :p Hahahaha

statezero
09-03-2003, 04:55 PM
man i was supposed to see J5 plus a bunch of other cool bands at Lollapalooza... unfortuneatly i was dieing, so i couldnt go.

DEVin
09-03-2003, 09:52 PM
PAGE THREE, OMG.

Ed
09-03-2003, 10:07 PM
i liked it better as it went on, the shinning payoff in #1 wasnt erectifying enough. the family matters robot thing was brillant though!




damn your copy paste.

Mike
09-03-2003, 10:23 PM
I like that the blacks aren't solid. Heheh! If you read that wrong, it looks like I just said that there is no solidarity among the blacks, but that's not what I said. I said that the black ink isn't solid and I like it. It's all shades of grey.

[bead of sweat running down side of head]

Page 2 is awesome as hell, though. If I don't get some payoff for seeing the boss man do his big action pose, then I'm gonna beat you up in Arlington, Devin.

MightyMatt
09-03-2003, 10:24 PM
Page 3 has to be the best of all....
humor, robots, and a bit of graphic beauty (on the panel for plan b)
Hopefully you will print this puppy up so I can buy one, and then I can show the ppl at school and they would want them.
And then you'd make a bundle. Maybe.
keep up the good work Devin, I am looking forward to what happened on the last panel on page 3 as revealed in page 4.

matt

skatermonkey
09-03-2003, 11:27 PM
Hahahahaha dude, your comic is teh r0><0rs!

saint manji
09-04-2003, 02:46 AM
you talented little bastard.
The clock is the best part. Stop while you're ahead. You're making us lesser artists jealous.

statezero
09-04-2003, 06:58 AM
dont you hate it when robots dont do your bidding?

cabralsoth
09-04-2003, 11:49 AM
ow man, that is killer thus far, finnish, finnish.

Logan Fray
09-04-2003, 01:07 PM
Oh man i love this comic its so out there, and it seems everyone has A.D.D.


Is Family Matters On?
yes.
Which One is it..


and so on...


Best Comic Ever.

IndieRockPete
09-04-2003, 04:34 PM
Originally posted by Logan Fray
Best Comic Ever.

chynco
09-05-2003, 09:15 AM
damn that was beauiful

DEVin
09-05-2003, 02:59 PM
Thanks everyone, READ IT ALL NOW KTHNX.

Logan Fray
09-05-2003, 03:03 PM
Ahahahah nice ;pencil; 's good job Chewie was great, funny twists.

20 Ba-jillion thumbs up...no make that 90-million-million

Ra Havok
09-05-2003, 03:30 PM
I'm baffled!

In a funny way.


Thumbs up, Devin. Thumbs up.

wannabeGeorge
09-05-2003, 04:14 PM
Based on direct experience, no doubt . . . very funny :) I like all the little elements, like the watch. Also . . . the expressions do not suck . . . wait a MOMENT (it's fish) why aren't you wearing your Mickey beanie in the middle of the last page? Your lack of continuity has ruined this otherwise entertaining strip for me forever . . . ahh ohh ah . . . ah . . . oh. :p

Justin
09-05-2003, 09:15 PM
::sigh::

That's it. I'm done with drawing... all hail the new lord, Devin.


Oh.. wait. I'm paying for art school... nevermind, I guess I have to keep drawing... ::sniff::

-Justin

skatermonkey
09-06-2003, 02:42 AM
Originally posted by Justin
::sigh::

That's it. I'm done with drawing... all hail the new lord, Devin.


Oh.. wait. I'm paying for art school... nevermind, I guess I have to keep drawing... ::sniff::

-Justin


Yeah, Devin, you suck....for rocking too hard....
And you're what? 14? Shit.........</envy>.....

Chris Piers
09-09-2003, 10:00 AM
I liked that. Especially when Superdevinmegazord said, "no."