entervoid sequential FINISHED

[jar]

I would have included the images but PJACK is being a whore.

Well. Resnorm's FINALLY back up woOT! No more deviantart links :)

I'm proud of this comic. I really spent some time on it, and I am HAPPY as hell. So, i'm sharring it with you, and feel free to kill it as well :)

Fenix VS James Warsaw II

Page One (http://www.resnorm.org/jar/fenix_warsaw01.jpg) Page Two (http://www.resnorm.org/jar/fenix_warsaw02.jpg) Page Three (http://www.resnorm.org/jar/fenix_warsaw03.jpg)

[MC Fumunda]

I think this is better suited for the Sequential art forum.

Off it goes!

[misfitX]

really really really good action there on the second and third pages...although the text is a bit i dunno off from the art
its all clean and crisp...then the art is all over the place (not that its not clean...you get the idea) really friggin good tho

[TheFightingFoetus]

I dig it. I like the frenetic colors, too.

[Logan Fray]

The arms on Page 2 panal 2 (top right) is a little weird.

[jar]

Thanks guys!

[Reilly]

Looks awsome man, I love it when people go all out and write, draw and color their own work.
Love the composition of the first page, the wizard looks cool too.
The only critisism I have is that page two panel two doesn't look as dynamic as it could. You've got to get the full swing effect, it looks kind of weak with his elbo bent.
Also the one dude looks a lot like Alex from SF3.
Anyway, keep it up, looks good!

--Reilly

[penciljack]

Originally posted by jar
I would have included the images but PJACK is being a whore.


Uh ... care to explain?

[M@u::]

You rock. Looks great ,lettering too!

[jar]

Thanks guys!

Oh lol, what I meant about being a whore? Well, I went to include all 2 pics in the thread, but for some reason it continued to say I couldn't....so having to post links is tiresome. Most peeps don't like to click links to see art is all.

[Reilly]

Heh, yeah, what I've been doing is just posting the actual image of the first page, and them links to the other pages. That way people can see the first page and judge wether or not they think it's worth waiting for the other pages to load.

--Reilly

[Virginie!]

cant get much better than this anymore IM jealous

[cabralsoth]

very nice work , but i just have no idea of placement of the characters... where the hell are they?!?!?!.... its this lack of understanding that will throw readers from the story. but as far as art wise it looks really cool.

[xadrian]

You should be able to post 3 images. Keep in mind SMILIES are images.

If you go back and edit it, you can have all three in there, just take out the smilies. That's what threw it off.

-end of line-

[jar]

Smilies through it off? LOL, awesome! Thanks.

Thanks again peoples. I know the placement of the characters makes no sence, but this was all thrown together "spur" of the moment. I usually don't mess up that bad :)

But honestly, thanks for pointing this all out for me. Much love!